Doubts attack and love fights back I dont know how long ill last Im trying and trying to stay on track but there's always the fear of the past
although there was more than this stanza that caught my attention... I have to commend you on your efforts. Everything was good and worth a second read.
coming from a self proclaimed writer like myself, haha, I know how feed back is alway appreciated.
I have to say I've enjoyed all the poems I have read so far and your style of writing is amazing. Have you put music to any of them? They could be incredible songs.
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i wish i could still write like that
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I dont know how long ill last
Im trying and trying to stay on track
but there's always the fear of the past
although there was more than this stanza that caught my attention... I have to commend you on your efforts. Everything was good and worth a second read.
coming from a self proclaimed writer like myself, haha, I know how feed back is alway appreciated.
keep on, keeping on.
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