dont understand

[bluekey]

blow every shot you get
miss every target
you want to feel worse
than you did today

i dont understand
why its like this
but flipping through pages
you see every fault

maybe next time
things will work out

at the time
it seems like the good call
breaking hearts
and building walls

but now your left
more alone
than anyone could
ever tell

Comments

[pavane]

this is great. I think it truly captures what it is intending to express - not that I would know, but it certainly captures a feeling I get. dripping with truth and insight into the human condition - a poem that does its job.

[bluekey]

well i look at how many relationships, or potential relationships, ive messed up by overthinking, being too picky, or thinking i can do better it makes me realize that im probably alone due to my own decisions...