never planned and never perfect

[bluemonkiesx]

 Title: Never Planned and Never Perfect
Author: bluemonkiesx

Pairing: Jiyong/Seungri

Genre: general.

Length: short drabble

Theme: #11 Kiss

Author's Note: 4/30. This is a birthday fic for krizza<3 aka, 
oxygenlove ~ ILOVEYOU, MEOW. and gah! I’m so sorry sorry sorry this is a week late. college coaches hate me >.>

Comments

[blushemphasises]

Omo. It's soooo sweeeet.

gahhh those two! always making me melt!

i loveeee it! seriously, love the parts where he kissed only near Ji's lips, i was thinking: KISS HIM DAMNIT.

but oooh ri's smart...pulling off the perfect kiss, the moment was just ♥

i really needed this! thannnkyou :)

p.s and i also love how Ji didn't say anything the whole time. this was so awesome

[bluemonkiesx]

gah! GRI does that to people. no lie. they make people melt or turn into mush. LOL.

hahah, I'm sure ji was thinking that too. XD

and yes! seungri is genius. not many people can pull off the perfect kiss ♥

aw, no problem lovely. i'm glad you liked :)

and eek! i'm glad someone mentioned that. i made a point to make no dialogue in here :)

[mangalover93]

awwwwwwwwww I'm so glad you joined the challenge :D GRI <333
please write more gri ??? *angel face*

hahaha I love the part where Seung Ri nearly kisses ji's mouth!! instead of ji teasing ri it is vice versa :)

Such a lovely kisssssss <33333

ILY !!! You are so awesome!!!!

lucky krizza :) she would be happy for this ^^

[bluemonkiesx]

bwhahah, I'm glad I joined the challenge. it's fun 8D
AND OMG. there will be more GRI, have no fear.
LOL.

and yes! it always seems like it's ji teasing ri. it needs to be the other way too sometimes.

ILU2 <3333333333

and askdhasd. i'm lucky i have such nice people commenting my fics. LOL.

[mangalover93]

I'm glad you're having fun ^^
yey for more gri <333

mhm :D

good writers deserve comments :)

[yenikal]

waaaaaa That was so cute ^^

[bluemonkiesx]

waah, thank you!
^^

[vaneszikkipower]

so cuttttttttteeeeee!!!
that was sweet.
Now coudl somene send this to GD or Ri??? :)

[bluemonkiesx]

thank you!
aish, gd and ri don't need to read this. they need to act it out.
ROFLROFL.
8D

[vaneszikkipower]

you're welcome.
It's jsut to encourage them ;)

[vessaharja]

OMG this was so cute~♥♥
I was seriously smiling throughout the whole fic 8)) too cute!!
Lol I remember the days when I had trouble reading fluffy fics... hahahah, look at me now 8DDDDD just getting all mushy over this ahahahha. 8D

Naaw. This was superbbbbb \o
Thanks for sharing ♥♥

[bluemonkiesx]

ohyay~ I'm glad you were smiling 8]
awww, why'd you have trouble reading fluff?! that seems impossible. LOL.

thank you for reading<33333