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[bluemonkiesx]

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Jiyong/Seungri
General, Angst, AU
Theme: #23 Heartless
5/30. HAPPY BIRTHDAY HAELIN UNNIE. ILU ILU ILUSFM.
btw, if anybody understands this, then kudos to you. cos I don't even understand it. lol. it just...came out.

You gingerly place on foot in front of the other, your arms outstretched keeping your balance. The wind blows gently, ruffling your

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[bluemonkiesx]

SPOT FOR haelin UNNIE<3

[haelin]

GODDAMMIT LINDA! GODDAMMIT! I'm soooo brokenhearted and so much hurting for this fic... And YAY FOR PLACING RI IN THE ROOF! Reminds me of Koe Wo Kikasete MV when Ri's hugging the invisible air screaming (i assume he was) his lungs out in that amazing roof scene.. HOW SEXY he looks up there.. Gaaaah (ok shut up, you're not making sense at all)

I love how painful this is because it's better to read angst today than fluff.. Because today is the worst birthday (in the real world) ever and I need my oxygen (which is g-ri angst) and you diligently supplies it to me and that alone makes this crappy day a lot better..

THANKS LINDA DEAR! as expected, THIS FIC IS A WIN!

[haelin]

AND SLFJSLFJSLFJSKLFJSFJSKFJLSF ILYSFMT!

[bluemonkiesx]

KASJHKASDHA.
YOU ARE INCOHERENT UNNIE, LOL.
<33333333

[blushemphasises]

SPOT~

[blushemphasises]

your writing is so strong. i...i

I EFFING LOVE IT! its beautiful, really it is :)

i swear, i can live off beautiful gri like this any day

<333

[bluemonkiesx]

wah! thank you thank you thank you<3

[bluemonkiesx]

omg! thank youuuuu<3
poor GRI babies :(

but the wind and the roof and the stars make up for it, no?
you are too nice<3333

*hugs*

[ai_sumairu]

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OMG!!! This is very beautiful!!! I love everything!!!! The scenes, the imagination, the angst, the love, the pain, the sadness... EVERYTHING!!!!

<333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333

[bluemonkiesx]

jashdgjasgdajshg!

OMG, thank you thank you thank you<3333333333

[sunnyshinee]

Mm, this was lovely honey. I love your casual repetition of certain phrases throughout the story. And the atmosphere is beautiful; all dreamy and surreal. And I love how much you express without dialogue.

[bluemonkiesx]

aw, thank you lovely<3
I'm glad the atmosphere came off that way, that's what I was trying to do.
I'm glad someone noticed it<33333