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blueplue_hotaru

(V)indictive

Jun 05, 2011 02:10

Title: Vindictive
Pairing: 2U/YunChun
Length: Drabble
Words: 238 words
Rating: G
Genre: Angst
Disclaimer: Not mine but the plot and words; prompt belongs to dilovesyunjae .
Warning: Nothing dangerous, I think
Summary: They can't never have the chance to love
A/N:
1) I hope i did a justice to this prompt. Truthfully, your prompt is the hardest so far since i'm not ( Read more... )

type:fanfic, genre:angst, length:drabble, author:blueplue_hotaru, rating:g, pairing:yunchun

Comments 10

blueplue_hotaru June 4 2011, 18:13:58 UTC

spot! for dilovesyunjae. ^^

dilovesyunjae June 5 2011, 02:58:28 UTC

Omg. Totally forgot abt this! I tink yunnie's the mentor. Poor yunnie, i tink the king banished him or something. Thanks hun, for this lovely sad piece.

blueplue_hotaru June 5 2011, 12:08:06 UTC

huhu mian!!! i made you wait and forget! T.T

0_0 you got it right! and right again!
*glomps*
you're good!

i wish i write it angstier, cause you wanted a very sad piece. >.>
*huggles*
i'll improve!

and thanks for the prompt! now i learned a new word. ^^v

jaceni June 4 2011, 21:18:55 UTC

SPOT! For later. :D

jaceni June 4 2011, 23:21:22 UTC

I'm a little confused bb. So, the mentor was either Yunho or Yoochun and the guy that was questioning what love was was the other? And in the end the questioning guy found out that his mentor had left, discovering that the mentor had loved him? And choose to forget about the possibility of love between them? I'm not sure if I interpreted that correctly, so let me know. :)

It was a pretty sad drabble though and I really liked the bold sayings that the guy was told. I liked the ending sentence too, even if I'm still deciding on whether it's Yunho or Yoochun the one who is the "you". ^_^

blueplue_hotaru June 5 2011, 12:02:46 UTC

ah~~~ half of it is correct. lol
aigoo! i think i've just written a confusing fic here...>.>

for me, when i wrote this, chun is the 'you'/prince; and yun is the 'he'/mentor.

the story was that they were once lovers, but because they could never end up happily and just kept getting hurt, chun chose he couldn't keep on loving and wanted to forget the pain. so somehow, he managed to forget all the memories with yun

but yun didn't, and still keep on loving. the king knew, and he's the one who pressured them. because chun is the prince and future king. rules and customs and such...

the king made yun to leave and chun then knew he's the one yun loves and remembers he's the one who wanted to forget.

so....hehe i made you confuse neh? ^^

jaceni June 5 2011, 14:40:08 UTC

LOL, I think I was the only one confused bb. XD Awe, your explaination makes it that much sadder. ;_; Poor Yunho. It's a sad world they live in then. Thanks for wrting this bb and love it more now that I know what you were trying to say. ^^

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blueplue_hotaru June 5 2011, 11:33:11 UTC

it is?
i tried to make it as sad as possible, i'm glad you think so.

*huggles*

aigooo...

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blueplue_hotaru June 5 2011, 12:26:19 UTC

hehe...v^^v