FIC: Line of Sight, part 2

[blueraccoon]

Notes and headers in part 1

Comments

[twoweevils]

Okay. First, I must pay great homage to you for writing CASEFIC! *loves* Not only casefic, but fucking AMAZING, well-researched, perfectly executed casefic. Casefic!!! *jumps around some more screaming "casefic

[karieflybabe]

*Tranqs the Twoweevils before commenting on the fic.*

[blueraccoon]

You know, the problem with getting amazing wonderful i love you forever fb like this is that it's often more coherent and lovely than the fic itself, which means I have to now figure out how to answer you. Bear with me; I'm a lot more coherent when I'm pretending to be someone else.

kay. First, I must pay great homage to you for writing CASEFIC! *loves* Not only casefic, but fucking AMAZING, well-researched, perfectly executed casefic. Casefic!!! *jumps around some more screaming "casefic"*

Originally this wasn't meant to be casefic, or at least not this long, but as with everything else...well, it grew. And grew.

This was brilliant. Everyone was perfectly-voiced. The original characters, even the minor ones, had depth and individuality (and I have no doubt you have detailed backstories for each of them), and "behaved" like real people.Oh, believe me, I have full backstories for all my OCs. Ask me sometime and I'll give you their birthdays, their school histories, their families, etc...It's kind of obsessive, but it's also a lot of

[raynedanser]

Got this one, too.

[blueraccoon]

thank you :)

[karieflybabe]

Very interesting, very well written... very long... looking forward to seeing where you take this... if you take it anywhere at all... isn't this the second time you have used Stephen? Or did I just fuck that up in my mind? >.

[blueraccoon]

*groans* tell me about the "very long" part. There were times I thought this story would never get done.

And yes, as I mentioned before, I grabbed Stephen out of this universe and put him in "Setting the Scene". But this is where he belongs.

[linaerys]

As I said in comment #1, every interesting, well-done casefic. Good set up of who the killer actually was.

[blueraccoon]

you have absolutely no idea how happy that makes me, because I had to go back and rewrite about three times to get that setup. I thought I was going to die before I got it right, and I still wasn't sure when I posted it.

*collapses into little pile of relief*

[linaerys]

Well, the big rule of mysteries is that the real killer has to be introduced in the first half of the story/book/episode. And you did that--not too obvious but plausible.

[fiia]

Lovely, lovely story. And I must second M of twoweevils with CASEFIC! Gooood casefic!

Thanks for sharing this with us :)

[blueraccoon]

thank you so much!