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blueraccoon

ficlet: the fourth wall

Mar 11, 2006 02:16

note: most of this was written about a month ago, while i was talking to skripka. for some reason, i didn't like it and tossed it away. i'd forgotten i wrote it until tonight, when i found it while looking for other things in the chat logs. i figured it was actually not all that bad, so i wrote more, added an ending, and here you have it. if you ( Read more... )

pavlov, gibbs/abby/tony, ficlets

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pathos73 March 11 2006, 11:21:07 UTC

You know - as a devoted Gibbs/DiNozzo fan, I hadn't really read your stuff with Abby involved...until today - and can I just say: WOW! Another lovely piece - you paint pretty pictures for my mind. Thank you

blueraccoon March 12 2006, 07:30:25 UTC

*g* thank you so much. I think Abby makes everything better. Not that Gibbs and Tony aren't wonderful on their own, but Abby is makes it all better. :)

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Re: Ditto blueraccoon March 12 2006, 23:40:44 UTC

This is actually part of a series, called Applied Psychology (also known as pavlov). The entire series can be found at http://blueraccoon.livejournal.com/tag/pavlov. There's a six-story arc, and then there are other stories that are part of the universe but take place sometime after that arc. If you'd like to read, feel free :)

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Nice ksl2025 March 11 2006, 12:26:01 UTC

I confess I can't tell where the break was. LOL. but I wasn't really looking for it either.

Very glad you decided to post it. Not sure what you thought was wrong with it. :-)

I think what I liked best about the story was...Tony and Abby are the only ones having sex, but Gibbs is definitely active participant...fully integrated into the act even when all he is doing is watching. Very nice that.

Re: Nice blueraccoon March 12 2006, 07:31:23 UTC

I'm not sure what I thought was wrong with it either. I think at the time it was too "heavy" for me, you know? it felt too dense. But now I kind of like it. :)

bcwrites March 11 2006, 13:42:33 UTC

I'm so glad you found this gem and decided to share. Gibbs power radiates throughout the entire story.

blueraccoon March 12 2006, 07:32:11 UTC

and that's exactly how it should be :)

pigglet27 March 11 2006, 14:04:52 UTC

There's something very powerful about Gibbs watching Abby and Tony, especially given that they are *his*. Thanks for sharing this, I thought it was great!

blueraccoon March 12 2006, 07:32:42 UTC

thank you so much :)

raynedanser March 11 2006, 14:33:52 UTC

Soo... Is this something you want me snagging for the site? And if so, where does it go in the order of things? :-D

blueraccoon March 12 2006, 07:33:31 UTC

It is, and this goes in the ficlets section with a note that it's part of the applied psychology universe.