Chapter III: Be in my band

Apr 12, 2004 11:09

THIS IS YOUR OPPORTUNITY TO BE IN A BAND ( Read more... )

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o yeth i am thee greatitht msjohnny_k April 12 2004, 12:01:52 UTC
Title: trucker shitten ( ... )

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mhm anonymous April 12 2004, 17:00:12 UTC
Title:
by: Green/Siler

Verse 1
1.Heard the marianette's car pulling in last night
2.smell of gas filled the air
3.It's hard to tell where she went
4.but the trail of bull shit isn't hard to follow

Verse 2
1.It was cold that morning on October the day I try to forget
2.She was impossible to obtain
3.I was told never to try
4.But the way things worked out; I should of listened

Verse 3
1.Now, this bed written city's got problems
2.So, we had to leave
3.But I guess in the long run it worked out the best
4.For me and... the altar ego, and not the rest

Bridge
1.And there is only one thing I can do
2.And I've found out I can't do a damn thing

Chorus
1. Don't look back at the things you've done
2. They're just reminders of short comings
3. You've got no angels in your outfeild, and the time has come
4. I'm out of luck... I'm out of you.

vrs. 2 / vrs 3 / ch / 1/ bridge/ interlude [solo of some sort]/ch

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Re: mhm msjohnny_k April 14 2004, 14:20:50 UTC
silly bitch DONT YOU KNOW I CANT FUKIN STAND THE TASTE OF YOUR HARSH ASS BREATH...
o sorry i thought i was talking in an im...oops

::awkward:: well i think that that was "lovely" ....
DAmMnit i cant lie that was awful i mean c'mon:
YOUVE GOT NO ANGELS IN YOUR OUT HOUSE???
please thats pathetic....
o sorry brian that was your line...
well ..huh...o wellzerz
COME TO ME
love me

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DON'T LAUGH hypersleep April 17 2004, 03:18:46 UTC
Go easy on me now... it's past 5am and i'm under the influence of IHOP and Meaghan Vail<< DEADLY COMBINATION...

Verse 1
1.Heard your car pulling in last night
2.Wanted to ask, but it didn’t seem right
3.It's hard to tell where we went wrong(i added one word... so sue me)
4.It’s hard to laugh when the fights are so long

Verse 2
1.It was cold that morning on October ninth
2.I forgive you for not calling, I’ll forget our fight
3.I was told never to wish for love on a star
4.But the way things worked out; I’m happy where you are

Verse 3
1.Now, The city's got glitter but it’s fading fast
2.So, I had to leave to forget about the past
3.But I guess in the long run it worked out the best
4.For me and love, and not the rest

Bridge
1.And there is only one thing I can do
2.Run away, ‘til I run back to you

Chorus
1. Don't look back at the things you've done
2. Don’t keep dreaming of all you could’ve won
3. You've got no angels in your outfield, and the time has come
4. We finished right back where we started from

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Re: DON'T LAUGH bluesbr0 April 17 2004, 09:47:09 UTC
Awesome.

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Re: DON'T LAUGH bluesbr0 April 17 2004, 09:48:50 UTC
I'll have Siler reveiw it to, then we'll determine if any part of it should be kept. Awesome writing though.

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Re: DON'T LAUGH bluesbr0 April 17 2004, 09:49:50 UTC
whats your name, btw

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