Saturday and Sleep Deprivation

[bluevelvet]

I couldn't sleep worth a damn last night. I lay there staring up at the ceiling, watching the light from the streetlamp shift on the walls through the shadow of an ancient pecan tree across the street. Watching the crystals at the bottom of this old crystal chandelier in my room sway just the slightest bit from the trucks going by a block away

Comments

[razorart]

That's one of the most riveting entries I've read in a long time. You're an excellent writer (and I'm not being obsequious--I rarely say that to anyone:)

[bluevelvet]

Thank you Very much for the compliment.
I appreciate the encouragement I feel when I get good feedback on anything I write. It really helps.

[gigglecam]

hugs

[bluevelvet]

Thanks, and hugs back.

[lusciouswife]

That is a wonderful piece of work. :)

[bluevelvet]

Thank you, and thanks for reading it.

[kellianne]

this is wonderful. i was right there.

[bluevelvet]

Thank you so much. I've carried that memory for years, and never tried to put it into words before.

Re:

[kellianne]

you've done well.

[swankygrrrl]

Wow...I'm so glad I read that. It really made me think.

[bluevelvet]

I'm glad you read it.
I appreciate whenever anyone takes the time to read a long entry.
Thank you.