Cigarettes ; Aoi x Kai ( Chapter 7 / ? )

Jun 27, 2009 03:37

Title : Cigarettes.
Chapters : Chapter 7 / ?
Author : bluevioletapple
Genre : Angst ( ? ) , Drama
Warnings : A teenyweeny bit of violence in this one.
Rating : PG-13 ( ? )
Pairings / Characters : Aoi x Kai , the GazettE
Synopsis : He felt someone's stare burning a hole in him and looked up to find Kai staring intensely at him. Comments : Um yeah. I never ( Read more... )

cigarettes, chapter seven, aoixkai, fanfiction

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k435y June 26 2009, 23:38:20 UTC
*clamps jaw shut after a long minute* His father is such a cruel being. I hope his mother's okay. =/

But Kai was so adorable at the beginning of the chapter. Curse that old man for making that side of Kai disappear so quickly!

And don't be afraid of creaking rocking chairs. It's just the wind! Don't let your imagination run wild, ya know? =)

Please update soon. =)

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bluevioletapple June 27 2009, 07:47:00 UTC
Ahh , everyone ( including me ) hates Kai's dad. Gaahh. D:

Yeah , Kai was adorable , ne ? I loved writing him when he's so cuddly and full of love. <3 XD

But the window outside was shut and there was no wind at all. I was thoroughly creeped out. Haha. DX

I shall update as soon as I can. :D Thanks for the lovely comment ! <3 <3 !

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lovely_aoi June 27 2009, 05:02:33 UTC
I love this but i really hate Kai's dad =_= abusing my poor kai-chan! -huggles him and makes him safe-

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bluevioletapple June 27 2009, 07:48:03 UTC
I hate Kai's dad too. Abuser. But I don't know where to go after this. Hmmmm. :/

* joins in your huggles and starts a cuddlehuddleglomp fest. XD *

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truelove_speaks June 27 2009, 08:43:19 UTC
Ah, poor Aoi. Don't feel too bad.

I knew it was his dad! Lol - but that was pretty messed to kick Kai like that. I mean, seriously. Jeez.

Ooh, creepy rocking chair, huh? I remember staying up late like that too and I'll hear a cat (that's not my own o_o) crying/whining outside, but it sounds more like a baby crying. It always freaked me out. D:

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bluevioletapple June 27 2009, 09:18:48 UTC
The kicking part just wrote itself out ! I was creeped out about the chair at that time and it just wrote itself out. D:

I think hearing babies / cats whining is super creepy and scary. I'd freak out too if that happened to me. And the only thing on the rocking chair outside is my 50cm tall Pooh Bear. DX

And thanks for the comment ! :DDD * Gives you a huge huggle and expensive chocolates * XD <3 <3 !

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truelove_speaks June 27 2009, 10:52:31 UTC
D: Waah, that is creepy. I hope your Pooh Bear isn't the one moving it. I have this thing against creepy looking dolls and certain stuffed animals, but I love Pooh Bear. :3 I has big stuffed version of him myself.

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bluevioletapple June 27 2009, 10:59:50 UTC
Haha , my sister is scared stiff of dolls. She won't even look at them. I hope my Pooh Bear stays innocent and isn't the one moving the chair too. I wouldn't wanna throw him out just for that. XD

Pooh Bear is the awesome. Large stuffed versions of him are the best. :DD

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kajikitsune June 28 2009, 02:54:57 UTC
That man is an evil bastard doing that to Kai. Please post again very soon. I am loving this fic. I also normally don't comment unless it has a very good plot, proper grammar, and at least one of the genres is angst. Angst is one of the best genres alive!

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bluevioletapple June 28 2009, 16:20:31 UTC
Yes , he is one evil bastard of a man.

Hopefully , if I don't die from school and assignments and whatnot , I'll have the next chapter out by next week ? Haha , never trust my estimations. :D

You flatter me. * blushes * I don't think I write that well anyway. Cause grammar is normally one of my fail points. But I'm working on it. XD

ANGST RULEZ. Cause it is one of the best genres alive , AGREED.

and thank you for commenting ! You made my night all happy and sparkly. :DD * Dumps a whole load of half-white and half-milk chocolate cookies on you * XD

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bluevioletapple June 29 2009, 10:51:29 UTC
* joins you in kicking his father *
AGREED. Yay for me updating ! I could've made them stay together longer but the plot won't move then. XDD

Kai's father .. something to it .. Ahh , we'll see. :DD

ILU for commenting ! <3 <3 <3 <3 ! * showers you with love and ai and heart shaped chocolates *

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