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[blushinlkewine]

ok, some very recent stuff ive written. 
i personally think these kinda suck, but id like some outside opinions. 
these also arent full works. just what ive got so far. and am stuck now.

Nathaniel,
   I'm heartshattered.
      And you don't seem to care.

With your sky eyes 
       That glaze over me,

Nathaniel,
  I'm tumbling again.
      And you

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ummm

[sred6]

Hey...I can see the first one going somewhere...it does seem unfinished.

I like where youre going with the second one. If you work all the months in there it would be awesome im sure.