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[bluxsam]

Title: Of Ankle and Heart

Pairing: David Villa/David Silva

Rating: G

Disclaimer: This is fiction, a product of my imagination.

Summary: Set at Las Rozas (Spain NT headquarters) just before qualifiers.

Author´s Note: This is a silliness. First fic in this fandom. English is not my first language. Any correction/reviews will be wellcome

Silva grimaced when

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[leathlin]

until he felt the small hairs on his nape stand on end and a warm breath brushed his ear.
I simply melted at the beggining(and honestly,after reading first lines I just knew I'd love it :])

"Ok. Ididn´tsignedmynewcontractbeforeit wassurethathewasdefinitelystayinginValencia."

Silence.

"...AndI´mpatheticenoughtocontentmyselfwithDavidSilva´smerepresenceinmylife."
*cuddles David*
This was so adorable, I actually went all "Awwwwww" aloud,lol :D
Mumbling!Villa is too cute for words!

The deep sound of his own voice surprised him. He just let the bathrobe fall again and grabbed Villa´s waist instead with a trembling hand. El Guaje didn´t move, nor even seemed to breath. The midfielder found himself breaking the short distance between them and he kissed the striker´s mouth before he could articulate a word. Silva didn´t blink until he saw the other man closing eyes.
♥(this heart sums up everything I felt while reading)

[bluxsam]

You are so kind!I appreciate your words a lot.
Thanks for reading.
;o)

[unscathed]

That was really good! I especially loved the exchange between Silva and Villa at the end. It was sexy that Silva took charge/initiated the kiss and the "Are you sure you want to be my mother?" line was ridiculously awesome! I've liked how people portray Silva, but I think I really loved how you gave his personality range from the beginning to end. Almost like the bath washed away his inhibitions (after hearing the Villa/Pepe talk) and he was reborn as a stronger person. Someone capable of just taking what he wants. Loved that

[bluxsam]

Thanks for your review! It is very useful.
* The first line . Well, I wanted it to be a little bit confusing because Silva was waking up and heard only part of what Villa was saying (anyway, I didn´t work that line too much).
* You are so right about Pepe!I didn´t even realised it until you mentioned it!
Once again thank you very much ;o)

[bluxsam]

Mmmm we have similar tastes...
You are so right about writing!
Thanks for reading

[lalalalovesong]

This was so amazing! It's lovely to see the roles switching with Villa being the blushy one and Silva making the first move. Awwwww ♥ Keep writing.

[bluxsam]

;o) I felt like trying different roles. I´m glad you liked it!
Thanks for reading and for your support.

[kat_lys]

This fic made me smile so much!!! I love how Silva was spying on Villa talking about the reasons he wants to stay in Valencia. He's so cute :)
And Pepe = so much love.

"I have been drunk myself and I use to shout and sing silly things, but I don´t talk about feelings that I don´t really have...Wow, look at you, I think I never saw you blushing before."
I love this line. I'm sure Silva would be the only one able to make Villa blush! :D

"Ok. Ididn´tsignedmynewcontractbeforeit wassurethathewasdefinitelystayinginValencia."
Silence.
"...AndI´mpatheticenoughtocontentmyselfwithDavidSilva´smerepresenceinmylife."
Haha! Poor Villa, he seems so embarassed!

"Are you sure you want to be my mother?"
I bet he doesn't XD
I love shy!Silva taking the initiative :)

So it was your first fic in this fandom? Welln now you've got to write more about them because it was great! :)

(sorry, had to delete and re-post my comment because it didn't worked well)

[bluxsam]

I´m so glad that this made you smile :)
In my head I thought that Silva has a spying side in him...
Thanks for your words