I'm trying to write a book. this is the first couple of paragraphs...tell me what you think.

[bmason_r6]

It was a snowy sunlit day across the Blue Ridge Mountains of Virginia. The schools had been shut down on account of the foot of snow fall the night before. The powdery substance shifting on the ground under hiking boots and shovels

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[letsplay_havoc]

i'd sure like to wrangle up another beer.

[letsplay_havoc]

I know...i'm at work and i had 2 shots of jager before i came.