Onward! Chapter Two.

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Here is Chapter Two. I took the advice in putting me as a male version of Hermione. But this chapter doesn't really address that. As it turns out, I'm giving each main character their own chapter, describing some background information about the person.

Chapter Two - Emblem of DarknessA young second year Slytherin boarded the Hogwarts Express,

Comments

[kamykhan]

I'm hooked. I particularly like the line "Snape had his lips curled up in a shocked expression," because it's so characteristically Snape. I can't wait for more! btw, kudoz to you for spelling my name correctly ;)

[kagechikara]

Eeeeep....better than the last one, you did the spacing right so it didn't kill me to read it and...I don't know, just an awesome chapter. Makes me want to write. *grins* Poor Brentie is a Slytherin? Tres scary.

[blue_funk_monk]

I agree with Camilla! :) nice work!!!

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Now that I've been sorted into Slytherin, my LJ colors and icon have changed. As for the spacing in the first chapter, I just copied and pasted it from Word without realizing that the formatting wouldn't carry over. The next chapter will detail the background of the third main character. Hmm. I wonder who it will be ... *thinks*