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bob_fish

Fic: The Phoney War, Chapter Ten

Sep 20, 2012 22:13

Title: The Phoney War, Chapter Ten: Flashpoint
Setting: Fullmetal Alchemist, mangaverse, post-series, slight ending AU.
Characters: Roy/Ed, Havoc/Rebecca, Riza/Miles, Al, Winry, ensemble.
Rating: NC-17 overall, this chapter a mere PG-13
Word count: 8163 this chapter
Summary: Two years on from the Promised Day. Amestris is without a Fuhrer, the ( Read more... )

[fandom] fullmetal alchemist, [pairing] havoc/rebecca, [pairing] roy/ed, [fanworks] fic, [fic series] wrong turn 'verse, [chapterfic] the phoney war, [pairing] riza/miles, [fanworks] art

Comments 42

enemytosleep September 20 2012, 22:00:10 UTC

Chapter 10 brought to you with the perfect amount of cleavage.

bob_fish September 20 2012, 22:06:47 UTC

Rebecca aims to please.

havocmangawip September 20 2012, 23:18:39 UTC

What a treat after a long week of classes. More later. For now? Squeeeeeee!

bob_fish September 20 2012, 23:21:30 UTC

\o/ It's taken me so long to finish this thing! <3 Thanks for being patient.

japanimecrazed September 20 2012, 23:26:53 UTC

This is great! I loved the wedding, and Roy and Ed's conversations. I'm looking forward to the final chapters!

bob_fish September 20 2012, 23:28:23 UTC

Thank you! <3 Glad you enjoyed.

lunaria_kitty September 21 2012, 00:45:14 UTC

Yay update! :D *does ridiculous little happy dance*

Love the flashback moment with Hughes at the beginning.

Jean and Becky's wedding was so very adorably them and I loved every moment of it. It was good to see everyone having fun before all hell breaks loose.

This is such a political mess, I love it! *laughs* Angry!Al was great, I almost wish we could have seen more of that. And I laughed hard at Havoc's hoping he's not the one left in charge, even though it was a tense serious moment. (I love Havoc. You write him so well. <3)

Ed and Roy made me sad--I kinda had a feeling this was coming, but I'm glad Ed was persistent Roy's agreed to give it a try afterward. Also loved the bit about Hohenheim and Ed admitting that he does miss him. <3

I have so much love for this series. Glad to hear there'll be more soon! :D

(Also, kitteh music is the best kind! <3)

bob_fish September 21 2012, 15:39:52 UTC

Yay, glad you enjoyed so many things!

Angry Al is fun to write because it doesn't happen so often. And Roy needs people to challenge him sometimes. In a weird way, the added pressure of everything being about to explode is probably helpful for making people focus on the important stuff. XD

(They are noisy kittehs so it's a good job I like it <3)

sky_dark September 21 2012, 00:59:06 UTC

*drags hands down face* why can't there be more? The almost break-up was riviting or however that is spelled. It's almost frightening when Ed's the voice of reason; I'm sure Roy doesn't know what to make of all of it. Ed is suppose to be the emotional ticking time-bomb; but Roy is, as always, beautifully in self-denial for the good of god-knows-what.

bob_fish September 21 2012, 07:31:12 UTC

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed.

Ed is the voice of reason a lot in this fic, if it's not what to name the cat. XD Yes, Roy's attitude sort of doesn't serve any practical good. I imagined he had a sort of unexamined mental block about serious relationships for the reasons mentioned, and was somewhat shocked to find out that he was accidentally in one, and with someone who saw through him at that (despite being a ridiculous amount younger than him). Poor Roy's dignity.