Fic: The Public Eye, Chapter 1/3

[bob_fish]

Title: The Public Eye, Chapter 1 of 3
Author: bob_fish
Genre: romance, drama, comedy
Rating: R
Word Count: 5813 this chapter
Pairing/Characters: Roy/Ed, plus Team Mustang and the ensemble
Warnings: some sexy stuff, swears, a little sap.
Summary: Three and a half years after the Promised Day: Roy has finally made it to the top. Now, as he and his team

Comments

[tierfal]

1. I love your Ross.
2. I love your Breda.
3. I am extremely intrigued by the new kids.

“If you said this headline is a cause for minor concern, I would have ignored you and told you to make me a coffee. Speaking of which.”
NO BUT I REALLY LOVE YOUR BREDA.

“And married people flirting is gross.”
BLASPHEMY. Unless the married people in question happen to be one's parents, in which case objection sustained.

“Simple.” Ross holds up her coffee mug. “East City has six gay bars. At least two of those you wouldn’t walk into if you were a soldier. I would walk into the biggest of the remaining four, which is Gracie’s, I would start buying people drinks, and then at some point, I would start up a round of ‘who’s the most famous person you’ve ever screwed’?”HAVE I MENTIONED I REALLY LOVE YOUR ROSS? …this review would be on track to get extremely tedious if I wasn't about to go to sleep

[bob_fish]

Awwww, thank you so much for such an epic flattering review! <3 There will be more of this when I've put TCR to bed, which hopefully will be soon …

I love Ross and Breda and the new kids too. This was meant to focus on Roy and Ed as much as I could but the gang just crept on in.

I am enjoying writing them so established but subject to pressures and stresses on their relationship. As happens to the best of couples in RL!

[amethyst_koneko]

wow. Not sure how I missed this one month's ago but I'm glad I found it now! :) I love the way you write Roy and Ed! Characterization and voice are spot on. Ed's "JFDI" and the magical ninjas who kept sneaking into the house cracked me up! :D Hope to see the rest of this fic soon! :)

[bob_fish]

Finishing this is first on my list after I knock The Compass Rose on the head! It's such a nice change for me to write domestic peacetime banter and everyday stuffs after all the doomy plotty drama and separation of TCR!

Thanks, and so glad you enjoyed and were cracked up! <3