Vitamins

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Disclaimer:Vitamins
PG-13
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Remus/Sirius
Afterlife
All characters are the creation of JK Rowling

Comments

[brighty18]

I totally left a comment before and it... disappeared? Is that possible? This is not my day. Anyway, let me see what I can recreate...

This was truly lovely. I've often thought that seeing a full moon for the first time as a full human would be a powerful experience. I dealt with that briefly once in a fic, but this was even better.

And your drunken Sirius with is mis-used words (malapropisms?) was really adorable. The dialog between these two is really wonderful - they seem so HAPPY!

This was truly beautiful: Remus turns back to the horizon and watches the full moon rise for the first time in his memory. Sirius doesn’t. He looks in Remus’ eyes; watches as the light from the sun reflecting off the moon reflects off the center of his universe.

[bobthemole]

Thanks for the awesome comments!

It's therapeutic to write them so happy - the world may be going to hell, but at least the puppies are together!

And thanks for adding me to your friends list! I'm honored.

[rev02a]

Awwwwww..... so cute! Yay for dead lovin'! (Well done!)

[bobthemole]

Yay! Thank you!

[reenie72]

Awww. That was adorable! You brightened up my day, thanks a lot! :-)

[fate216]

Mmmm, so good. Love the banter and the goofy nickname.

[bobthemole]

Thank you! I'm glad you like the nickname, because Remus sure grimaced at me :)

[bobthemole]

You brightened up my day, thanks a lot! :-)

You just brightened up mine! Thanks for the compliment!

[edge_is_strong]

the last paragraph was just gorgeous. great job.

[bobthemole]

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked that paragraph.

[forest_rose]

That is lovely, and made me smile, and the last sentence just, gaah, killed me, in a happy way. That was just what I needed after a long day with a demanding consultant - thank you! xx

[bobthemole]

*hurriedly resurrects Rosie*

Can't have you killed when there's so much more awesome fic to come from you :)

Thanks, Rosie! I'm glad I was able to improve your day. That's just the best type of compliment.

[myworldmytrue]

This was lovely beyond compare. Remus calling Sirius his "miscreant" had me grinning like an idiot. I can't explain it. :)

The idea of Remus being able to watch the full moon rise is so...beautiful. Made me all teary-eyed.

I just loved the overall light and teasing mood of this fic. They are finally happy together. Forever. Ohh!

[bobthemole]

Thank you so much! I'm glad the story worked so well for you.

The puppies deserve a happily ever after and if JKR can't give it to them, then the onus is on us, dammit! :D