a poem

[bobbyvirgo]

Gnosis

Comments

[elnigma]

I like everything (a lot!) except the last line. I like it when people leave open for other people their own interpretations, and until then that wasn't it for me. I was pretty happy till then. I only criticize cause I like the rest so much. :-)

Re:

[bobbyvirgo]

Thank you for your kind comments...yet, could this 'creation of the universe' be yet another poetic device of the poem? I believe so...what does it mean to create a universe?

indeed..what IS a universe?

just food for thought ;-)

[elnigma]

its your poem, it can be anything you want. :) hugs