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Sep 29, 2005 22:59


this is a poem I wrote for an english assignment. I got a 22/24 on it. Although I don't like the last two stanzas as much as the first two. But please, enjoy.

Braindead

4 o’ clock pm.

The cursor on a blank file in Microsoft Word

Flickers like an ember on a candle wick,

Luring the eye to linger on its spasmodic dance,

One second it’ll hide

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sack_kun September 30 2005, 03:26:11 UTC
I remember you asking me for chromatic...

It's a pretty good poem.

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bohybrid September 30 2005, 20:05:23 UTC
thank you ^_^.

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