Stop me before this gets a second chapter XD

[bokuranoboken]

I don't write. I am not a writer. WTF is this thing I'm posting? Who am I? What is the purpose of my existence...

Title: Now Let Me Get This Straight
Author: chastity_rowan kotomine
Rating: R for Language and Innuendo (seriously, do you think I'd write something Het and Gen? XD)
Type: Original fiction
Chapter 1/??

Comments

[mushroom18]

then started singing I touch myself

- Would've been nice if you italicized the song title. :D

favorite pink and tulip designed

- tulip-designed.

Trystan is such a GAY name, I swear.

This left me numb. I know you can do better, hotter, and smuttier SMUT than this. And please do. :)

[chastity_rowan]

YOU DID NOT QUOTE: "I felt his grandeur rising." :O! :O! :O!

I know you can do better, hotter, and smuttier SMUT than this. And please do. :)

I don't write. I am not a writer. WTF is this thing I'm posting? Who am I? What is the purpose of my existance...

Di ko naman talaga kinakareer eh, I'm just the gay clown ^_^

[mushroom18]

Not a writer my ass. Let us remember the results of your reaction papers, and the one who first wrote countless stories in FF.net.

[bokuranoboken]

lookie at my pretty avatars~!

[star_flare]

....You should write more. Preferrably something het or gen XD, but whatever floats your boat. =P

You're a good writer, this story's really good. Short (and quite smutty, but not so detailed, thank God), but nice all the same, and a good conclusion to the flow.

[chastity_rowan]

I traumatize myself when I write detail pron. But believe me, having a straight character in a smutty story is the least I can do.

I also write het... but to often mock it's shortcomings. I might post one later on.

... damn, I think a chapter 2 is on the works T_T