[Fic] Ohmiya One-Shot: Rain

[bokuwashinigami]

First time posting a piece of fanfiction in a REALLY, REALLY long time. This took me FOREVER to write; I actually started it in October. I've gotten somewhat rusty; please forgive me. ;____;

Comments are much appreciated! I hope you enjoy it! :D

Title: Rain
Author: bokuwashinigami 
Pairing: Ohmiya, vague Sakuraiba hints
Rating: PG
Genre: Light contemplative angst,

Comments

[arashifanatic]

:SLKDFJLSDKFJSDHF:ASJDALSKJD I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED IT!!!!!
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

GRACE IS AMAZINGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!! :D ><^> i like how you put the pond scene in there 8D everything was awesome. and Aiba throwing nino into liquid nitrogen would be hilarious 8DDD i wonder if he would ever try that....? xDDDDDDDD

THANK YOU FOR FINISHING GRACEEEEEEEEEEEEE 8DDDDDDDD
I LOVES YOUUUUUUUU!!! ><^>!!!!!!
NINO YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! hehehehe :]

[bokuwashinigami]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA OMG RABAH. ><^> ♥

I'm REALLY glad you enjoyed it!! It personally fell WAY short of my expectations mainly because of the melodramatic romancey-ness of the "plot" (I' m using this word lightly) making me die while writing it. BUT IT'S FINISHED AND I'M HAPPY WITH THE ENDING.

Sorry if it was too clichéd and such, I am just a sucker for happy-ending Ohmiya stories. @___@;;;

YOU MAKE ME HAPPY BY LIKING IT AND FLAILING AND BEING MY FIRST COMMENTER. ><^> ♥

Thanks for the pond/gazebo suggestion last night! I'm glad you like how I wrote it. 8D

...AND HAHAHA I WOULDN'T PUT IT PAST AIBA TO TRY SUCH A THING.

YAY RA BAH! NINO YAY! ><^> ♥

[kirasebi]

that was just too cute ^^
They both are cuties and it's really nice to read

[bokuwashinigami]

Thank you so much for reading! ...and I'm so glad that you found it to be cute! I love Ohmiya and am a HUGE sucker for happy endings. :D THANKS AGAIN!

[kirasebi]

I love Ohmiya too and I think that this ending is nice and it couldn't be any better it seems... I don't know the right term...
Natural?

[arashinokizuna]

omg im DYING from the cute
this was truly amazing!!!
so cuttte
so sweeeet
cant form proper sentances cos its just LOVE <3
thank you so much for sharing :D

[bokuwashinigami]

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR READING AND COMMENTING! :D

Awww, I don't think this piece deserves so much praise but I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading it! I felt like I made it too sweet/sappy, but in the end they're happy and all is good.

Your comment is LOVE! <3 Thanks again for reading!!

[faradakiut]

aw~~ so sweet~ thanks for sharing ^^

[bokuwashinigami]

No, thank YOU for reading! You're the sweet one! :D

[rio_sora]

sweet~cute~nino is running away n ohno is oblivious, but in the end it just simple n they are together rite...i love this kind of plot, with happy ending for sure, n thanks to aiba, otherwise nino will keep on running away, i love the ending. it's so meaningful, hands under the blanket, love it, thanks a lot for sharing^^

<333333

[bokuwashinigami]

Yes! I LOVE happy endings a TON and I'm glad you do too! I wasn't sure about the whole chase in the rain part but it's good that you liked it! Aiba's so adorable; I needed his humor and spaziness to break up the melodramatic romance bits. :D

The ending was something I am particularly fond of..so I'm super elated that you loved it. Thank you so much for taking the time write a thoughtful comment and for reading! You're too nice! <3