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Jan 16, 2014 10:15

ok,ok. it's easy and it may be both fun and useful.
in 70 ways to improve your English they said: Start your own English language blog. I already have it. Oh... yes, almost already. What i try now. Just several sentences every days. Nothing special. May be some thoughts, plans, ideas. If you see some mistakes or incorrect grammar or bad usage, ( Read more... )

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jon_quille January 16 2014, 06:34:52 UTC
OK. I would say "it might be both funny and useful", "in 70 ways to improve your English it is said", "what I'm trying now", "every day", "see any mistake, wrong grammar or words usage please let me know", "today at night I'm leaving for", "crazy about weather" - meaning is not clear for me here, "I guess next few hours will be devoted", "I like snow", "and wisdom to make the right choice".

Writing in English is a good idea. At least it helped me a lot. Do not stop and good luck.

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bold_crow January 16 2014, 07:24:16 UTC
thank you!!!

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helgina January 16 2014, 07:15:44 UTC
Hi! I don't mean to be tough about it, and my English is far from perfect anyway, so these are only my ideas of how I would use these ones:

- please, give me a sign
No comma after "please"

- So today night
"Tonight" or "this night" maybe

- i'll go to St.Petersburg
"I'm going"

- and i'm little crazy
"a" before "little"

- the next few hours will devote
"will be devoted", for it's you who actually devotes them

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bold_crow January 16 2014, 07:25:03 UTC
yes. fuck my brain and shame on me))) thx!

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davarix January 16 2014, 09:13:49 UTC
I think the goal of the exercise is to write more and more spontaneously. The grammar & phrase construction will improve with additional reading and practice. So imho don't bother yourself too much with current mistakes.

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anna_domini January 16 2014, 10:08:31 UTC
Они не говорят "almost already" :) это калька с русского :)
If you see ANY mistakes
give me a sign - не говорят. проще, просто tell me или let me know
today night = tonight
не I'll go - I am going, если это уже дело решенное
I'm a little crazy - не поняла, что ты имела в виду, но так не говорят. I'm a bit worried лучше.
I suppose I'll have to make painful choices in the next few hours (просто suppose в начале предложения имеет значение "допустим", "предположим"). Нельзя опускать "I".

:)

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anna_domini January 16 2014, 10:10:41 UTC
и да, меня еще смущает frost - это не тот мороз, другой контекст в любом случае.

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helga_olga January 16 2014, 17:33:00 UTC
мороз в таком контексте, пожалуй, назовут тупо "cold"

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anna_domini January 16 2014, 17:43:42 UTC
ну да.

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helga_olga January 16 2014, 17:36:16 UTC
с почином :) Good luck and remember: KISS principle always helps))

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bold_crow January 16 2014, 17:50:56 UTC
KISS principle - what do you mean?

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helga_olga January 16 2014, 18:02:04 UTC
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/KISS_principle :)
а также любим всякими мультинэшнл компаниями))

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bold_crow January 16 2014, 18:17:38 UTC
намек понят))

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