[Drabble] Born in Blood

[boldlygoingkirk]

Done for a certain verse in which I'll be playing the role of Jim in, along with get_me_a_drink and christinechapel. He starts off returning to the Enterprise after three months of missing, three months that were lost from his memory. This is the start of what has happened in this missing time, and an explanation for a few things he will soon start to remember.

WARNING: This

Comments

[no_dryer_box]

Is it bad I liked this? Poor Jim!

Though really, as someone else who's attempted to write a torture scene, I wish I could have done it this well. It provides the right amount of suspense and a little bit of fear. Nicely done.

[boldlygoingkirk]

Not bad, I don't think. Probably worse that I enjoyed writing it so much. :[

But I'm glad that you enjoyed it, that it came across clearly for you.

[get_me_a_drink]

Oh good god.

This is... oh my Lord. This is intense in every way, heartwrenching, painful to read, and beautifully written. Wonderful descriptions of torture, and also, maybe this is bad but makes me really happy because it gives even more dynamic to BNB, this time physical instead of mental. Really awesomely amazing, Mandii, uuugh I want to play now LOL