Comments | bolly_rpf: Stumble and You'll Fall

plazmah in bolly_rpf

Stumble and You'll Fall - PG

Mar 08, 2008 16:15

Title: Stumble and You'll Fall
Author: plazmah
Rating: PG
Fandom(s): Bollywood - RPF
Pairing(s): Hrithik Roshan/Aishwarya Rai
Summary: During the filming of Jodhaa-Akbar, their resolve slips as the tension builds.
Notes: WHAT HAVE I DONE??!! *sob* I feel unclean somehow. This fic isn't very long cause I was squicking myself out as I wrote it. And yet, I ( Read more... )

aishwarya rai, fic, hrithik roshan, jodhaa akbar, hrithik/aishwarya

Comments 15

monimala March 9 2008, 17:50:18 UTC

LOL! That was scarring to READ and not because there's anything wrong with your writing, but because I will never, ever shake the feeling that Hrithik is as gay as blazes...which actually makes your plea for Hrithik/Abhi/Ash something that should totally be written.

plazmah March 9 2008, 18:20:24 UTC

LOL, gay-as-blazes!Hrithik amuses me so. OT3! ;)

monimala March 9 2008, 19:29:48 UTC

OT4 if you believe that Amitabh and Ash have a thing, too! LOL! Orgy at the Bachchan Haveli!

wasabi_girl1 March 9 2008, 19:38:26 UTC

O_O

Lol, I still subscribe to the Abhi/Ash/Hrithik/Suzanne theory. ;)

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thelana March 9 2008, 18:53:46 UTC

Oh, really, really lovely! Me want Hrithik POV

plazmah March 9 2008, 20:14:02 UTC

I may just have to work on an OT4

vanilla_garner November 10 2008, 05:37:17 UTC

Hrithik gay?! OMG, lol, if that is true send him my way and I'll make him a man xD

Please please please please write more of this... *dies*

uranus_ge August 20 2009, 07:23:45 UTC

…I was squicking myself out as I wrote it. And yet, I still managed to finish writing.

Masochist >=)

Don't know if I got any of the personalities right

Oh I think you did. I'll tell you why in a bit.

Enjoy the fruit of my heresy

*gorges herself*

Hrithik is as gay as blazes...

*gasps* Guys! This fic didn't make me squick, but that certainly did. For a father of two sons, that allegation is baseless cuz anyone with two brain cells to rub together will also see that Hrithik’s wild about his wife.

Why, cuz he claimed to be reading Femina? *snorts* Oh wait, was it cuz he didn’t ravish Aish at the first chance he got, in her trailer?

I may just have to work on an OT

No, you don't have to work on an OT4 for crying out loud. Geez, what ever happened to OTPs, and their inherent inviolability? Augh, hate the proverbial third (or fourth) wheel *rolls eyes* Too over-rated, and just as cliche as love triangles come.

I now have nightmarish mental images of Big B, equipped with a bucket of viagra and sans wig stalking Ash's bedroom.Are ( ... )

uranus_ge August 20 2009, 07:26:44 UTC

…the fire of a thousand suns in his touch

Uh…That was a tad hackneyed, but can retain some of its poetic nature *shrugs noncommittally*

Chemistry must be unexplainable; none of that made any sense, silly.

Lols@Aish!

…with a smug look on his face

This brings home all those things Hrithik said about Aish’s performance in “Dhoom 2”, and how he wanted to best her in “Jodhaa Akbar” for getting the better of him in D2. Of course I’m paraphrasing; I don’t think there’s any enmity between them both. I do remember the tone of his voice, though; it sounded something like ‘your ass is mine’. I can clearly see Hrithik’s need to compete and contend with Aish in that pretty mug of his, in that line.

What a terrific love/hate relationship these two share *giggles*

…he had pressed her against a pillar with such a fever in his eyes that she couldn't help but be drawn to his lips, afraid that she would kiss him when the script did not call for one.

AND THAT TOOK ME TO MY HAPPY PLACE W/O DELAY.

You’re merciless. I like that.

…the kiss they ( ... )