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Y Si Fuera Ella

Jul 01, 2011 06:53

Title: Y Si Fuera Ella
Author: bonamanamina
Genre: Romance, Angst
Pairings: OnKey
Rating: PG
Summary: They met, get to know each other, fall in love and part after...

A/N: I just now remeber...the italic sentence in every start of the chapters (which is also the summary)...is the promt(?) (i think that's what u call that) i got it from the japanese ( Read more... )

ysfe, !fanfic, onkey

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a-yo! bonamanamina July 1 2011, 22:50:50 UTC

i know right?!i'm always listening to DBSK/TVXQ!/JYJ's ballad songs to motivate me in writing...their songs are just amazing!the song that i'm listening now for the next part is White Lie...

i think...it will be a sad ending for jinki..except you want a twisted ending.. ;D

thank u very much for reading and commentng!

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Re: a-yo! bonamanamina July 8 2011, 15:13:43 UTC

i'm sorry about your mom's relatives...

i wll try do something about the ending... ;D

thank u gain for reading and commenting...please wait for the next chapter...^^v

ahem_bpoutarawr July 1 2011, 08:24:33 UTC

gee, what's that? dun tell me you kill Kibum.. noo, *wailing* wasurenaide and forgotten season are great choice, jaejoong's always great 8) i want the next part!!

a-yo! bonamanamina July 1 2011, 23:25:31 UTC

*hands you tissues and rubbing your back* uh...*suddenly runs away* yeah!!!kind of! XOOO! *hides*>.<

the next part...is...uhm...coming...^^

a-yo! bonamanamina July 1 2011, 23:26:15 UTC

and yeah...thanks alot for reading and commenting!^^

keyzy_kyumsy July 3 2011, 02:47:38 UTC

TT__________TT
i wanna hug kibum...........
y so sad?....;__;

a-yo! bonamanamina July 8 2011, 14:49:23 UTC

thanks for reading and commenting...please wait for the next chapter!^^v

tokki24 July 3 2011, 17:00:29 UTC

Saaaaaaaaaaaadddddd~~ TT__________TT
*curled under blanket*
It's too cruel.. They love each other but they can't be together.. Can't you make it the other way?! I want them to be happy.. :'(
Nice writing anyway.. :')

a-yo! bonamanamina July 8 2011, 14:45:43 UTC

my promt is like that (if you noticed the sentence on top, the one italized)... so it's somekind of like that...but maybe...i can something about it...?^^v

thanks for reading and commenting...please wait for the next chapter!^^v

javanice July 4 2011, 09:46:51 UTC

is it sad ending? ;______;
it's really heartbreaking :((

cant wait for the next chap... :D

a-yo! bonamanamina July 8 2011, 14:41:01 UTC

uh...yeah, it's a sad ending...i guess??? ;)

anyway, thanks for reading and commenting....please wait for the next chapter!it'll be the 2nd to the last chapter.!^^v