Type : Oneshot
Rating : PG-15
Genre : Crack, failed smut
Pairing : Yamachii
Summary : Chinen shock with their apartment condition....
I make the sequel, it's 100% Yamachii scene. Risa chan told me that this is PG-15, so I change the rating. Hope you like it...... <33
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Anything for my squirrel... )
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Glad you like it... :)
I still can't write the whole smut part...
I don't have any courage... XD
Maybe later after i read all your smut fic??? :p
Maybe after that i can get any inspiration..... :D
Thanks for reading ne.... :D
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I really like your writing style :DDD
Poor yamada end up with no make up. XDD
but it was so sweet when yamada say that he could go to their apartment because Chinen wasn't there.
I think this is a PG-15
again I like it a lot ^^
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I change the rating....
Yeah...poor Yamada. It's chii fault..*whacked by chii
'Yama chan : It's your fault sei-nee chan, you don't have the courage to write my making out session with chii..(Yama-chan pouted)'
Gomen....Yama-chan, I'll tried another time..okay?
(Yama and chii chan nod)
Hahahaha.... XD
Glad you like it risa chan... :D
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LOL yeah, is not easy to write smut, I have write two but I always feel very embarrassed by posting it. :D
yeah, I enjoyed reading this :D
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Maybe after this I'll try to make the real smut scene... XD,
Hahahahahaha... :D
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It's funny and hawwth so hot kissing scenes *faints*
Every part is just great!
And you call this fail!?
Throw away those thoughts! You did a really great job Sei-chan *pats*
hmmmph I was wating for the *cough cough* scene. *slapped*
Ryosuke it's your fault to make me disappointed!!!
buwahaha, now as a punishment you have to clean up Everything
I'm sure you'd make a great smut scene too~
Unlike me xD (maaa I didn't even yet wrote one...O3O but the first one will for sure be fail x//)
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But I can't finish the whole scene...so I think it's still fail....:p
I'll try the real ones when I'm ready.... :p
'Yama chan, you must be patient ne~' *pats Ryo chan
=)) нɑɑ˘°˘нɑɑ˘°˘нɑɑ =))....:D,
Naaaaaa...I'm sure you can write smut too Rii-chan, if you want it.... :D
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uuu yay~ take your time, no need to hurry ^^
we always can wait xD
sou sou Ryosuke
maah *sighs* I hope I can...
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Chii just go with Yamachan to hotel..
make out with him..
i will clean your house
*whacked by Chinen ^^
Love it sei chan...
i agree with risa chan
your writing style was good
not like me..
very very terrible..hihihi
i will chase you if you run and hiding
hihihi
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Glad you like it Haru chan.....XD
Yeah, go on Chii...I'll help haru chan to clean your house...:p
*whacked
Don't chase me haru chan, I already out from my hiding place... :)
Let's learn together, kay.... Ilike your story too... :D
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arigatou
un..learn it togther with you and another friend...
ok..i will not chase you..^^
like a kid...
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I really like this...
*coughs* stupid glass *coughs*
Great update!
And, how could this one be a fail?
This is good~
Hope you write more YamaChii for us~ :3
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I'm still new in Yamachii world, but I really like them.. :)
Well, if you say so,,arigatou ne~ XD
Yeah, I like write about them, hope I can have new idea to write new story soon...:D
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