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[bonibonichan]

Title: When It Really Hit Him

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[bone_fauna]

Sirius stared at the doorway for a long time before he sank down to his knees and clutched at his chest, willing himself not to cry. He wouldn’t. He couldn’t.

He did.

Love that paragraph.

Also love how you express Remus' greif at the loss of his parents - the keening, and clinging to Sirius. So heartbreaking :-(

Fucking war *shakes head*

And poor, poor, poor Flora :'-(

[bonibonichan]

That's my favorite paragraph, actually, and I love a keening Remus. ^^ I'm glad I'm not alone!

[twilight_nyx]

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There are no words. That was intense. I'm trying to find something to say, but I can't. The emotion in that was - well, "wow" doesn't nearly cover it. x.x I'm sorry, my mind is blown.

Flora! *in shock*

[bonibonichan]

^_^ Thank you for your compliments! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Yeah, murdering her was difficult for me.

[lilyoda]

oh no oh no oh no....

:(

you know I don't feel much remorse for John Lupin's death. I'm kinda glad..I guess its a he deserved it (in my mind) thing.

Flora on the other hand.

poor Remus.