Elephant in the Room

[bonomanic]

Drops of sweat were rolling down Donghae’s neck, getting soaked up by the fabric of his t-shirt as soon as they touched it. He ignored the tickling sensation as he moved through the first parts of their new choreography for Miinah, watching his body crouch and jump in the mirrors, weaving through the gaps between his fellow members.

It was

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[bonomanic]

Spot for Kim-ah. <3

[bonomanic]

Noooooo! (Where's that button again?) No one touches any toki-dwaejis upon penalty of being banished to Kyumin hell. D: They're on the IUCN Red List, we shall cherish and protect them!

1) DENIAL IS NOT A GOOD THING IF IT INVOLVES NINE CHAPTERS OF KYU IGNORING DONGHAE WHO IS PRACTICALLY PANTING ALL OVER HIM. Not cool, Kyuhyun. I hope we get to the point soon where all that denial in your fic leads to hot smexy sex. Remember that kitchen floor? Yes? Good.

2) ... you're making me blush, meimei. Thank you. :)

3) Oh, you didn't catch your soul back? Damn, I'm going to complain to Dan about this tomorrow. And I would probably die and go with you to hell/heaven/whatever because of the utter embarrassment of reading this again. I shall just leave this behind and aspire to be better next time. I'm thinking light and fluffy Kyuhae. Or some super secret project. Sound good

[naransaram]

UM THIS WAS AMAZING.

Your Kyuhyun and Donghae were SPOT. ON. Actually everyone was spot on. LKDjg;ksdjgla. I literally can't speak in coherent sentences right now, this was THAT GOOD.

Also, LOVE your Heechul. That was definitely something he'd say. AND KYUHYUN IMITATING EVERYONE? I was in tears. That was hilarious.
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This was so good <3 <3

[bonomanic]

LYING IS BAD! >:(

... one day, one very fine day at some point in the future, I shall prove to you that I can do better. Because this is making me cringe whenever I try to read through it again for editing. I'm glad that you liked it though, that makes me feel a little better. Although nothing you say will ever convince me that this is good. D:

[naransaram]

I WASN'T LYING!!

And I'd love to see more of your work <3 This was fabulous.

[bonomanic]

I'll try my best. :) And thanks, hon.

[bonomanic]

Thanks. :) I'm glad you liked it, since I'm not really fond of it myself.

[sujureiko13]

Oh jeez, my brain basically...short circuited. The first part with the dancing and the touching and the Donghae and the Kyuhyun and the THRUSTING.

ILUSFMRN. SO MUCH.

[bonomanic]

Lol. I'm sorry for frying your brain, but then again I'm also happy. That's the reaction I hoped for. ;)

[shanancelice]

The first thing I notice is this is a Kyuhae fic, the second is it's long. I love the long ones :)

However, once I start reading, I enjoy it so much that it is not that long anymore, I just couldn't stop reading at all. You wrote it good :D

Poor Hae, worrying about ruining everything all the time. But... because of his feeling was compressed for so long, when it burst out, we have hot Kyuhae smut <3 and I totally approve that XDDD

Thank you :)

[bonomanic]

Hey, that's exactly how I feel about Kyuhae fics and length. ^^ But yeah, it turned out way longer than I thought.

Thank you so much for your comment, it really made me smile. I decided yesterday I shall try to write some light-hearted Kyuhae next so that I can get away from Donghae's angry side. Or at least only brush it or something.

But yeah. Smut practice! :D Don't we all approve of Kyuhae smut? Keke.

[shanancelice]

"I decided yesterday I shall try to write some light-hearted Kyuhae next..."

Please do so~ ;D

[bonomanic]

I shall certainly try! It's the Christmas thing, I really don't want to do depressing stuff for such a wonderful holiday. I just hope what I have in mind actually works out the way it should feel like... :D