Chaos Theory

[bonomanic]

Title: Chaos Theory
Pairing: Donghae/Kibum. (Negligible mentions of other pairings.)
Rating: NC-17
Genre: Smut
Word Count: 1'908
Warning: Explicit sex.
Disclaimer: The characters in this are fictional and any actions and opinions thus thought out and not real.

Summary: Kibum can't remember why he thought that it was a good idea to go clubbing with

Comments

[namikaze_jkc]

THIS. It's my long test/midterms later and tomorrow and I find this? Yay for stress relievers. :D But seriously, I miss reading fic..

OHMY.. *jaw drops* How did you know I used to ship KiHae?!? =)) Nah, I'm kidding, but yeah, I shipped them when I didn't know about them. Especially in Full House. :D This was just so hot and I'm grinning weirdly again.

On another note, KangKyu. SHOOT. Both my biases with each other?! I want to hug you right now.. *hugs*

[bonomanic]

Oh, good luck! I hope things went well for you! :) Will you have more time for fic reading after exams are over?

I think it's actually kind of easy to ship them. Since Donghae seems to be the only one who really gets Kibum to warm up and fool around, the pairing kind of punches you in the face whenever they're together. Also, they look great together, which is always a plus. ^^ I might have shipped them if I hadn't been so deep in Kyuhae waters by the time I really found out more about Kibum and his friendship with Donghae. Glad this made you grin. :D

I couldn't resist putting Kangkyu in. They're my crack fix. ♥ I'm so happy someone else is happy about that! /hugs back

[namikaze_jkc]

Thanks! Hours away from my Math midterm and I'm being optimistic And following Siwon's lead of praying, honestly, he's such a good influence on my spirituality once you get over the fact that he always takes his shirt offA bit I guess..

Oh KiHae, I'm sorry. KyuHae took over and Kyuhyun crept his way up into my biases. Creeping like a boss \m/

Someone needs to write Kangkyu crack!fic or Kangkyuhae. That would be EPIC, I TELL YOU

[bonomanic]

Math, URGH. I hope it went well? Oh girl, HAHA. Your phrase about Siwon made me laugh because it's so true. xD Siwon hasn't had any effect on my spirituality so far, but I guess there wasn't much to work with from square one, so it's not very surprising. I acknowledge and respect his, though. ^^ I think praying before something that makes you nervous is probably very good for calming yourself down because the ritualistic aspect focuses your thoughts and the spiritual one gives you hope and strength. :)

Ah, well, Kibum sort of went MIA, so no one can blame you. Also, Kyuhyun can be a little hard to resist when he tries to draw you in. ^^

Heh, well, maybe it'll happen. :) I know of at least two other people who have a slight weakness for Kangkyu as crack pairing. ^^ I would be all over it in a heartbeat.

[eun_yoji]

ahhh kihae. i miss reading them. TT______TT
thhank you for writing this and satisfying my biggest kink for that ''kibummie'' nickname <3 :P
and clingy donghae is just love. ^_^

[bonomanic]

There's not a lot of Kihae around anymore, is there? :/

Heh, you're very welcome. ^^ I felt that was an appropriate name for whiny!Donghae to use (and I bet Kibum secretly likes it, keke).

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ♥

[eun_yoji]

You're welcome, the owner of a very nice avatar ;>

[lahaela]

I feel like this is a really late comment, but seriously
Only you could get me back to reading fanfic XD I went on such a long hiatus, and then I was all 'oh, bonomanic posted! Guess I have to read it then~'

I'm not a big fan of Kihae (I was...in the very beginning....for a couple days? weeks? and then Kibum went MIA and it went downhill from there) but I liked the fic mostly because I NEVER hear of Kangkyu...or Shindong in a pairing (although admittedly, it was more Leeteuk all over him) or Simin....these are just so rare =stares thoughtfully at fic= that even though they were barely mentioned, imagining it made me giggle.

Write more Kyuhae smut in the upcoming weeks. =Realizes I sound demanding= Please? With school starting, I'll need it. =Attempts and fails at imitating Donghae's puppy eyes=

[bonomanic]

There is no such thing as a late comment on fic, my dear. ^^♥ And asjdalksjfaklsjfoasf omg why are you so sweet, let me hug you and never let you go! ;~; And then the thing you found was this super rushed random Kihae thing that I don't even like, what is that. D

[lahaela]

Haha ♥
It's not that I dislike Kihae. It's just not something I would go out of my way to read ^^"

LOL Shindong NC-17...=blocks out of mind= He's got enough love with Nari...in fact, he's the only one who's not so desperate he turns to other guys :P
Unless those rumors about Siwon and Donghae are to be believed...=will watch Strong Heart to judge=

Yeah, I get what you're saying. But I think fanfiction is at the same time better, because it lets the reader imagine a little. Even if you could draw those images, that would be your imagination, but it would necessitate locking out some of the readers' imagination. For example, you can say Eunhyuk has red hair--but is it straightened or that permy thing? Usually it's not specified, and I like having the choice.
So LOL I prefer your writing. (Although I've never seen your drawing, and if you're in any way like me I don't want to...)

[bonomanic]

Then I'm even more happy you read this even though you were on hiatus. ♥♥♥

LOL. Yeah, let's think that way. I'm telling you, the NC-17 Shindong was a one-time-thing. I'm cured of that now. The images are enough to last me for a while. And oh, I've decided to ignore those rumors. Even if they went public with a relationship, I don't think that would necessarily stop me from writing fanfic because it's never been about anything remotely real.

I like that idea a lot. :) It reminds me of those moments where I had clear pictures of some scene or other in my head and then the writer went ahead and mentioned a detail that threw me because things looked different in my head. xD Sometimes I just get frustrated with trying to translate images from my mind to paper; and sometimes trying do to that gets in the way of the story-telling. But I'm working on it. ^^ Thank you for saying that bit about fic, though, that's really a wonderful way to look at it and I want to keep it in mind.