fic: Sand

Apr 06, 2007 04:05

Title: Sand
Pairing: Pin. duh.
Rating: R
Word Count: 580
Summary: Jin. Pi. Beach. Blowjob.
Notes: I am not even sure if this comm is for posting fic. Uh, hi. This was inspired by this picture. Yeah.

there is more than one way to make Jin scream. )

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wintersjuly April 6 2007, 10:38:51 UTC
After a mighty struggle

HAHAHAHHAHAHHA, I'm not even sure why this amuses me so much BUT IT DOES

"Oh, I can make you scream," Yamapi says in a low voice, a gleam in his eye, "and I don't even have to tickle you to do it."

*GIBBERS HELPLESSLY*

Yamapi tends to jump right into blowjobs like this, as if there's nothing he wants more than to have Jin's entire cock in his mouth,

OH GOD YES. YES Aljdlsajdksajdjsakjdsajdlkajsdljaljdsaljdsald (I hope you weren't asking for coherence)

which is grabbing Pi by the hair and shoving his face into the sand, yelling "WHAT NOW? WHAT NOW, Mr. I-attack-people-after-I-give-them-blowjobs?"

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAH OH PIN ♥

IN CONCLUSION: HOT , I LOVE YOU AND MOAR, KTHXBAI.

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spurious April 6 2007, 10:44:21 UTC
;salkdfj I am so glad the mighty struggle amused you because I thought it was HILARIOUS. Oh self. ;__;

*GLEES* I think now I can go to bed. Though I am feeling all *___* and SQUEE and ;alskdjf.

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matilde_cl April 6 2007, 10:52:47 UTC
PIN! COMPETITION SEX! I LOVE.

♥ and guh.

OH and that PIC. sfhshgjx. *rakes nails over desk*

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spurious April 6 2007, 15:13:40 UTC
:DDDD! Yay!!

;alksdjf I know. I defy anyone to look at that and not think of porn. *_*

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guiltyschu April 6 2007, 13:57:28 UTC
!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ I'm sorry, I can't think of actual words, because I'm kind of blown away by this ficlet at the moment. It's hot (so hot), it's funny, it's dorky and -

so he does the only thing he can think of at the time, which is grabbing Pi by the hair and shoving his face into the sand, yelling "WHAT NOW? WHAT NOW, Mr. I-attack-people-after-I-give-them-blowjobs?"

- it's dumb. That line, incidentally, is beautiful. XD

♥ <-- I think that's all I need to say.

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spurious April 6 2007, 15:18:46 UTC
:DD I am so pleased that you liked! *_* Thank you.

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snowqueenofhoth April 6 2007, 16:15:26 UTC
Jin isn't quite sure, but he thinks they've both won, here.

Except for that part where Pi got a faceful of sand. XD
Jin totally won that one.



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spurious April 6 2007, 16:17:42 UTC
Hee, yes, but Pi made Jin scream. :))) And I'm sure he will return the face-sand favor heartily.

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4_03_am April 6 2007, 17:30:00 UTC
OH GOD. THIS. YOU WERE KILLING ME LAST NIGHT. GUH.

Yamapi moves slowly down his body

Yamapi laughs, low in his throat

Yamapi is leaning over him looking incredibly smug

dkahsjhdjadh. dies. I'm, I just, I...*dies*

grabbing Pi by the hair and shoving his face into the sand, yelling "WHAT NOW? WHAT NOW, Mr. I-attack-people-after-I-give-them-blowjobs?"

HAHAHAAAA. WIN. Link to this in my inbox after a relatively crappy morning has brightened up my day ten folds. ♥ ♥ ♥

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spurious April 6 2007, 19:21:35 UTC
as;ldfjk I AM SO GLAD IT MADE YOU HAPPY. ♥♥♥

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