That new student [part 2]

Jul 01, 2010 18:58

After their friendly meeting at the fountain, you could say their relationship has been improving. I mean, they still quarrel all the time, or perhaps they quarrel even more but there’s something different in them, there’s something….friendly. Like if they actually had fun while arguing about how much time Key takes when he goes to the bathroom and ( Read more... )

!fanfic, , pairing: onew/key, !present, fandom: shinee

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rinni1905 July 2 2010, 06:44:20 UTC
Omo, baby, no spot for me? Haha, kidding. I love you and you did a very good job, writing this. I wanted to comment in the part 1 but I don't have enough time for that since I have to do housework and tonight I have to go to the cinema with my friends. I'm so sorry, baby.

Aw god, do you know how cute is this? Definitely too cute that you don't even know. Gah, Kibum and Jinki are so perfect together and they're just too adorable for words. Lol at the love-hate relationship, Kibum in denial is too cute, that I just want to hug him tightly. I like it best when Jinki asked Kibum to be the only person tamed the diva inside him. Woah, could it be more romantic like that? Onew honey is a bit aggressive here but I love him too much. Lol, Kibum-sexual.... Yay!!!!! I love that term. Baby, you're so smart and so cute. *pinch your cheeks*

You write a really long fic, aw, I agree with someone from above, you shoud make a sequel or a sidestory to this, because this is absolutely so good!!!!!

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boogie14 July 4 2010, 17:38:51 UTC
SOORRY!!! i was in a hurry!! my time in the computer was finishiing!! DD:
Tehee. Thank you! *feels acomplished*

Jinki was jealous. He wanted to be the only one. And...well...if Minho is there too then he can't be the only one.
Kekkee! -hugglees-

Sequel...i'm not sure...i'm afraid to mess up.

Anyways! I LOVE YOU UNNIEE!!

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owlbee July 2 2010, 07:39:55 UTC
i loved this! a lot. ♥

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boogie14 July 4 2010, 17:17:40 UTC
OMG! Thank you! ♥♥♥

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owlbee August 4 2010, 06:14:02 UTC
omo, how can i just left such a short comment like that.. *facepalm*
but its no lie when i said i loved it! because i DO love this. THAT a lot . :D

i love the love-hate bit on the first part,
and about those key-kibum side too..
and how on earth you can come with 'Kibum-sexual' term! such a briliant idea :D

ahh, i just remember the first time i read this i was on sleeper train! -okay, this is totally oot-

as much as i LOVE your drabble, i do LOVE your longer shot fic like this one.
in other word, just, do write moar dongsaengiee..! xD

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boogie14 August 4 2010, 20:03:58 UTC
lol, dun worry unniee!!
it's enough with just some little words!
i'm happy to know you liked it.

lol, it wasn't easy i was writing ..thinking for a good 'ending' ...thinking thinking thinking and then *pooof*

i'll try unnie, i'll try to write longer!

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mazokuwithwings July 2 2010, 12:11:27 UTC
GAHHH DANG O.O ( ... )

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boogie14 July 4 2010, 17:31:25 UTC
FIRST OF ALL. YOU'RE EXTREMELY LONG COMMENT MAKES ME HAPPY HAPPYY!!!! :DDDDDD

I googled that Tsundere thing and YESH! i agree with you i also think Kibummie is a tsundere...he might look tough and stuff but i'm sure when you get to know him then he must be pretty sweet and caring

I'm so glad you liked it THAT much! such a honor! *bows*
but don't cry!

I'll try! *U*)9
Thanks for reading and commentig

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mankadi July 2 2010, 12:57:38 UTC
aww baby thank you so much for writing this to me~
gosh i love you~ and missed you =3=
-hugyousotighttillnooxygenleft- :DD
This fic is adorable :33
kibum being diva~ and cute sexy diva~
and pftt of course both boys and girls drooling over him~ :))
kekek i love jinki personality here~ goes all: "babe~" and such =DD
kekeke~ <3
and jjong ~damn hes so sneaky =3=
hyunmin <3
AND ONKEY FTW!!
i love it bb~ :DD
-huggles-
snd thanks again!!
LOVE YOU SO MUCH <33333

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boogie14 July 4 2010, 17:05:17 UTC
You're welcome! And yesh, i promised that i'd write something for you
so here it is!! *O*)/ ~♥♥
I miss you all too!! It suck not have interneet! ;______;
-hugs back with the little force left in her body-

Jjong is pretty sneeaky! óuò

I'm glad you liked it unniee!! :DD
-huggles-

LOVE YOU TOO!!

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melalocket July 2 2010, 18:50:28 UTC
love thisss soo muchhh!!!!! hahaha..

kibum sexual??? lol hahaha

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boogie14 July 4 2010, 16:59:58 UTC
yeps yesp Kibum sexual!

thanks for reading and commenting

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