Public
Title: Public
Lenght: drabble (451 words)
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff C: , Romance
Disclaimer: i own nuthing, except for the story
Warning:un-beta-ed. English is not my first languange D:
Summary: Kibum wants his relationship with Jinki to be more public.
( “Why can’t we make our relationship public, just like Jonghyun and his girlfriend?” )
Lenght: drabble (451 words)
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: G
Genre: Fluff C: , Romance
Disclaimer: i own nuthing, except for the story
Warning:un-beta-ed. English is not my first languange D:
Summary: Kibum wants his relationship with Jinki to be more public.
( “Why can’t we make our relationship public, just like Jonghyun and his girlfriend?” )
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Unnie is extremely sorry for being this late in commenting~ T^T Forgive me bb?
First, this was just mega mega cute and fluffy!!
Bummie always needs the attention on him~ How could Jinki fail him like that? D: I think having a more private relationship would make Onkey more intimate whereas Jjong & gf are just kind of unnecessary attention hogging .___. excuse my still slight doubtfulness and bitterness. I don't mind them dating but it's fishy and it really doesn't need to be exposed to the media...
moving in a way that looked first like a soft vals but moved on to a hot sexy tango between the two of them
This line♥ was just amazingly written dongsaengie! Your pieces are just getting better and better and makes me realize just how much I missed reading them :))
Thanks for sharing♥ I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE YOUUUUUUUUUUU
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you were forgiven since the verry beginning, serously there's no need to apologize!
OMO! i'm so extremely glad you liked it!♥♥
anmd of course, he needs all the attention on him, especially his boyfriend attention!
hmm....don't worry, i also think there's somethign fishy about it all, but i want to believe they really are together and not for some publicity but because they fell something strong for each other, and i want them to stay strong because either way one of them, if not both, will end heart-broken D:
Kekke, i feel so proud since those words come from you, becuase i really admire the way yo write! ;U; it's beutiful!♥
I LOVE YOU MOOOOOOOOOOOREEEEEEEEE!!♥♥♥
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but anw, gosh this was so freaking cute ♥
you got their character spot on and ohmygahhh, ilove the kiss scene :3 :3
chaptered fic? omo, can't wait for it! :)
loveyouloads sweetie ♥
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i need to learn how to make my pretty caps look so big
i'm so glad you liked how i portrayed them! ;u;
since it's a bit difficult to see a ff where Key is not a total girl and Jinki is the only macho around the block! D:
kekke, i'm glad you liked it! (;
really?!?! want an spot when it's ready?
LOVE YOU MORE UNNIE!
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ikr, key might have this div-ish and a bit femme nature, but he's still a boy! and jinki...people should recognize that he has depth personality and not all-stuttering-leader-that-trip-on-air =='
omo! re-really? you would give me? omg! i really can get it??
so happyyy C:
iloveyoulikewoahh! :DD
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yesh....it bothers me a little sometimes! =____='
and sometimes i don0t really care that much because the ff is just too cute to handle!
Yesh, yesh you can! *U*
seriously, how do i make my text that big?
iloveyoulikewoaaaaahx2
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