Running away

[boogie14]

Title: Running Away
Lenght: drabble (339words)
Pairing: Onew/Key
Rating: G
Genre: Romance
Disclaimer: i own nuthing, except for the story
Warning:un-beta-ed. English is not my first languange D:
Summary: Onew and Key are running away, leaving their hometown and families behind.

Comments

[rinni1905]

Hell yeah~ I love this so much even when I have to squinted my eyes reading this since I was reading this via my cellphone.

This days must be my bad day, some people talked rubbish behind my back, and Theia unnie even criticized me for not liking LuNew, so yeah, I hurt a lot. And when I'm reading this I feel like okay, just turn it around~ I can't be emo forever. Keke. Thank dear for writing this~

[boogie14]

RINNNI UNNNNIIIIEEEEEEE!!!! *runs and tackles you down*
i've missed you, and even if i found you on twitter and we talked i still miss you a lot! ;A;

OMG! how could they talked bad of my lovely unnie, who are they so i can go and kick their asses! D< lol, no i don't think i could take them down, but still.
omo! i don't really know Theia unnie, never actually talked to her, but if you don't like Lunew, then you just don't. I ...well i kind of ship Lunew and Keycole....because you see evntually both of them will have to find a girl, and these two are good matches (especially Key since he needs ovaries for his baby) though, i actually want me to become Mrs. Lee, looool, delusional much?

OMG! UNNINE, I'M GLAD MY FIC MADE YOU HAPPY AGAIN! ^V^ Kekke
and of course you have to be happeeeh!
smile

LOVE YOU UNNIE! ♥

[alpha_grid]

thanks for the beautiful story ♥
i don't know if you did this intentionally/subconsciously or not, but your story does reflect the struggle and challenges that many people, whom desire the same sex, are facing... i just wish homophobia and prejudice don't exist in our culture :(

[boogie14]

thank youu~ -u-)/

i know, i didn't exactly started writing it like that, but half-way trough writing the first pargraph i noticed what it could be. And yes, omg homobhia and prejudice are both horrible things
i wish there was more acceptance and love

[bree_nd]

Oh, small font is small. XD My eyes~

This is such a beautiful fic, Bellie~. Your writing is really improving~ Congrats!

Anyway, I love the idea of Onew and Key running away - it's like a fluffy drama. You know, instead of those angst ones. I teared along with Key as I read how he'd feel guilty for running with Onew but at the same time, he knows that he's going to be with the other and Jinki would keep him safe and happy.

It's really sweet and cute and it's one of the best fics I've read in a long time~ Thank you! :) //huggles. I miss you~

[boogie14]

lol, i'm sorry! ;A; i'll be sure to change my theme to one which has bigger font next time i write something! ;A;

WAAAH! i'm so flattered! ;U; it means a lot coming from you unnie, cuz i find your writing really beautiful and heart-touching.

i know, i wanted people to understand that they are not leaving because they are rebels, or they hate their parents and just want to make them angry or go against them. They are leaving 'cause they ahve this feeling that's bigger than them, that they can't hide, and they feel like they won't be able to be ONE as they want with their parents always getting in between. It's a tough decision, but life sometimes puts you through those.

ugh, i'm ranting! D:

omg! really?reallly? reaaly? you REALLy mean it? *O* -happy tears- i miss you too unnie! i hate that our time zones are so diferent!

[bree_nd]

Ah, just a darker colour is okay too. The grey's too light.

Oh~ Thank you. You have no idea how much that means to me for you to look up to my writing; I've been very upset with my own writing for a while now - thus the hiatus and everything. I'm just feeling a little under the weather. Really~ Thank you so much~

I get what you mean. It's really a beautiful thing - true love. I understand that they know that they aren't right for leaving but they aren't able to even begin to explain the way they feel about each other cause true love is just something that cannot be described. It just is. And that's what makes it so beautiful. :)

And I'm just repeating myself. I can't find any words except beautiful. XD

Yes. I miss good fluff. I never realised that not many can write a good fluff fic without being over-cheesy so this is really special~

[boogie14]

it's okay, i can't stay with the same layout for too long, it kind of bothers me!

WHAE! but you writing has always been so beautiful! you've brought me to tears with some of your fics, and lol, well i've cried a lot with ff but only good writers have been able to do that.

AWWWW♥ i love you unniee! />3<)/ *glomps you*

omo! i always thought i had a tendency of falling on the so-cheesy-fluff-that-it-makes-you-wanna-throw-up. *sigh* aaahh, i'm haooy i'm not! C:

[adyaby]

aww this is so cute!! =')
i know they're gonna be together forever!! i just know it! xD i'm being delusional again (??) D:
but i love this!! ^^

[boogie14]

kekee thank youu C:
lol, you are not, they ARE going to be together forever

again, thanks for reading and commenting