The next part, yes. I almost lost hope, but it was definitely worth waiting. I adore Tsunades interaction with Team Taka (and their interaction with each other), just as her clear levelheadness that she woulnd't delude herself into believing that Sasuke was always the abraive (crimimal) brat he is now. Which brings to another topic: will you address Itachi and the council? I would heavily interested in seeing that coneversation between Sasuke and Tsunade. At last I want to say I like that Tsunade doesn't seem to see Naruto as some kind of saint or her grandchild, like she does in other stories. Here she truely acts like a Hokahe who has a village to run.
my favorite part was everythingrunespoor7December 7 2013, 15:07:51 UTC
This is such a great fic. The pacing is awesome, the interactions are to die for, and the suspense is killing me. (I noticed a suspicious lack of mentions of Kabuto so far. ;) )
The shifts in PoVs are great - I adored the first part of the first chapter, how the interrogations went on, Ibiki and Anko's different ways of reacting to each of Team Taka (Anko's easy manner with Suigetsu was so, so great), and each of Tsunade's tests with Taka. And their interactions, <3. That Juugo+Karin scene, how she manages to get him to stay because she argues Sasuke might need him and how it echoes with Ibiki's thoughts about her easily dropping loyalties in the first chapter.
I loved all the details, Sakura telling Tsunade about not being to talk with Sasuke, how being a medic-nin ages you earlier than most specialties, "Welcome to Leaf", Anko's thoughts about Orochimaru and admiring him she was younger and all of the things she just says about her own experience with him, creating a rapport out of her vulnerabilities. Naruto being the best
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I almost lost hope, but it was definitely worth waiting. I adore Tsunades interaction with Team Taka (and their interaction with each other), just as her clear levelheadness that she woulnd't delude herself into believing that Sasuke was always the abraive (crimimal) brat he is now. Which brings to another topic: will you address Itachi and the council? I would heavily interested in seeing that coneversation between Sasuke and Tsunade.
At last I want to say I like that Tsunade doesn't seem to see Naruto as some kind of saint or her grandchild, like she does in other stories. Here she truely acts like a Hokahe who has a village to run.
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The shifts in PoVs are great - I adored the first part of the first chapter, how the interrogations went on, Ibiki and Anko's different ways of reacting to each of Team Taka (Anko's easy manner with Suigetsu was so, so great), and each of Tsunade's tests with Taka. And their interactions, <3. That Juugo+Karin scene, how she manages to get him to stay because she argues Sasuke might need him and how it echoes with Ibiki's thoughts about her easily dropping loyalties in the first chapter.
I loved all the details, Sakura telling Tsunade about not being to talk with Sasuke, how being a medic-nin ages you earlier than most specialties, "Welcome to Leaf", Anko's thoughts about Orochimaru and admiring him she was younger and all of the things she just says about her own experience with him, creating a rapport out of her vulnerabilities. Naruto being the best ( ... )
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