New Fic-- Or Adi Is Very Sorry She Keeps Disappearing, and Brought Treats

[book_people]

STAYING

Sasuke was less than six feet away from her, and she’d never felt more alone in her entire life.  He might as well have been miles away.

“I have both family and friends,” she admitted to him, “but if you were no longer here, Sasuke-kun… for me, it would be the same as solitude.”  Stay with me, she thought as hard as she could,

Comments

[jade_wynds]

So my phone is being dumb again and I can't text you, but it appears that I'm going to be busy for the rest of forever, so you're going to need someone else to beta the rest. Sorry, and best of luck.

Also, your formatting got messed up. There are no italics.

[book_people]

No problem. Hope things slow down for you soon.

Thanks for the tip. Should be fixed now.

[rurounitriv]

This had definitely got awesome potential. Keep writing!

[book_people]

Thank you! I intend to. ^_^

[my_closure]

Hm.... curious. I'm interested to see just where it goes.

Also, I would be glad to help you in betaing if you still haven't found someone.

[book_people]

Yikes! Sorry I missed your comment for so long!

I'm glad it peaked your interest! Hopefully, the rest of it will work as well...

Thank you for the offer, but I may have found someone to beta for me. If it falls through, you'll be first on my list, though! ^^

[my_closure]

It's okay. I totally understand. I've been behind on responding to my comments as well.

That's totally fine. Just figured I would offer. <3 Best of luck, and if you end up needing another beta, I am more than likely available.

[rosalui]

Would quite like to see where this goes. 8D I do honestly agree that neither Naruto nor Sasuke would be powerful enough to fight Pein/Madara/etc if they hadn't left, but I don't particularly care, because the idea of Sasuke staying makes me squee. 8D

[book_people]

I'm glad you like it! ^_^

Don't worry, I have an answer to that lack of correct environment/potential growth situations. I... just can't tell you right now. ^^;; Next part should be out pretty soon?

The idea of Sasuke staying makes me squee, and I'm the one writing it. XD;; At least we're all on the same page, right?

[musogato]

Nice job! I'm also interested in seeing where this goes. :)

[book_people]

Thank you! I hope the next part lives up to everyone's expectations...