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butterflyslinky May 17 2015, 12:57:09 UTC
Wow, this was a ride!

I like it a lot. The trials were all very appropriate and the whole story was quite suspenseful. I also like the flashes of what was happening back in the real world and how hard it was on everyone.

YAY ENGAGEMENT! :D

My only problem is that we didn't get to see what the quill does, but that's minor and I know this story must have already taken a lot of time and effort to write, so I can be patient to find out.

Great job, guys!

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ocelot_l May 19 2015, 22:31:08 UTC
Thank you so much for the kind words! We're very happy that you enjoyed our tale of suspense and love! This mission took a lot out of our team, but they will become stronger people because of it!

Yes, hurray! :D (Although don't expect wedding bells to chime anytime soon, lol).

I'm sorry we didn't tell you what the quill did in this story. We actually had a segment written up where they learn what it does, but it was rather long, and this story is already huge, plus it didn't really fit with our emotional reunion ending, so we decided to save it for the next story. We promise, the reveal is coming, we just didn't want this to be any longer that it already was! XD

Anyway, thanks again for letting us know how much you enjoyed this! We love writing this series and we love knowing that others enjoy reading it! :D

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thecat620 May 17 2015, 15:42:07 UTC
I'm glad they all got their moments to reunite with their loves and things are going to be okay for them. This was brilliantly done and I'm so happy I read it.

Well done. :)

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ocelot_l May 19 2015, 22:32:10 UTC
Thank you so much for all the sweet comments you left for us! We are so happy that you enjoyed this since we spent a great deal of time and effort on it. Having such wonderful commentors like you really makes this all worthwhile. ^_^

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ocelot_l May 27 2015, 03:09:43 UTC
We couldn't have been happier with the epic music mix you made for our story! We know it was a beast to read and we're really grateful that you dedicated so much time picking songs that fit every aspect of the story!

I personally loved all the Silent Hill selections since this story did share a lot of themes with that series. I also loved your choices of the Camelot songs, since they fit Linkara's trial so well, 'I Will Wait' for Dan and 90s Kid's parting, 'Heroes' for 90s Kid and Linkara's falling out, and 'Nightingale' for Dan and 90s Kid making up. Honestly, I loved all the picks but there are so many that I would just end up listing them all! XD

Anyway, thank you so very much for all hard work you put into this and for enjoying our story so much. We love knowing that it exhausted you in a good way because that's definitely how we felt when writing it! ^_^

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