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perteltote January 26 2010, 02:36:55 UTC
"She was a fool not to suspect a child the second after the sweat cooled."

yep, that's a good one.

Also love your characterization techniques - like every time Guy needs to enter a room he kicks the door open. (Of course he'd never use his hands, that's way too easy :)

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