Have just reread this and am still blown away about how fantastic the whole thing is from the premise to the characterisation to the writing. If you ever return to this you'll find me and a whole load of others waiting in deep anticipation lol!!
The tension in this story is great, as is the way you portray each character. I love the dialogue, I love the backstories, I love Guy and Marian, and I hate that it stops here. All things considered, I'll probably be haunted by the what-might-have-been ending of this story for the rest of my life.
More please :-)britegrayAugust 26 2014, 03:00:19 UTC
Your writing is so good and it was so hard to wait between chapters. 5 years ago I took a break from checking so I could come back and read them all here. I told my daughter and she warned me "Sometimes they stop writing." (She reads fanfic too.) I just finished reading Chapter 20! I'm sad to see there is no more. Thank you for some great reading material. I hope to see you continue the story. :-) You're story was the reason I joined LJ.
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The tension in this story is great, as is the way you portray each character. I love the dialogue, I love the backstories, I love Guy and Marian, and I hate that it stops here. All things considered, I'll probably be haunted by the what-might-have-been ending of this story for the rest of my life.
So, y'know, thanks for that. ;)
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