Serpents

[bookishy_fic]

Comments

Serpents

[annie_lucas]

Very nicely done..I wish there was more..

[faege]

As always, your portrayal of these two is impeccable. The push and pull of tension is so great and you make Marian more likable--I can identify with her feeling of being trapped, rather than put off that she always seems to be her and Guy's relationship whenever they make progress.

[_sixshot_]

It's amazing story - feels like a great opening for "Fallout