Fire and Ice - Chapter 29

[booklovergirl]

Jack makes a new friend.

Pairing: Ennis/Jack

Setting: AU/AU

Rating: NC-17 for the whole story

Disclaimer: The characters of Ennis and Jack belong to the fabulously talented Annie Proulx. No disrespect is intended. Any OCs are mine.

Summary: Ennis del Mar is a defenseman and Jack Twist a left wing on a minor-league hockey team who meet when Ennis is

Comments

[annabirmingham]

Poor, poor Jack!

I thought it would be difficult to read about Jack and someone else too, but you knew damn well that his heart wasn't in it and he was just going through the motions - so to speak!

At least he has found someone he can confide in. Brady seems nice, but I hope Ennis finds Jack soon though before he hooks up with any more guys!!

Anna x

[acht_acht]

You bad person! Brady seems sorta okay, but I hate him! Personally, I think having a fuck buddy is nice to get you over a bad spell, but I just *know* Ennis is gonna flip his lid if he ever hears about this. Please consider not telling him ... Clara

[rosiet]

Well.. it's always hard to think about either of our boys with someone else...but you really conveyed well Jack's thoughts throughout. How much he doesn't want ANYONE but Ennis. Brady seemed like a nice guy.... but obviously..... I prefer Ennis, same as Jack does. I'm glad that at least Jack got a chance to admit how he's feeling to someone who understands. I hope Brady gets to find someone for himself soon ( but not Jack!! )

I really, really, really, hope Ennis calls Jack now or goes to him...fast. I can't wait until they are together again....

[bcatjr]

God.

This chapter was a deal breaker for me. Can't do this, Jack being with someone else, despite the circumstances. Right now I pretty much dislike both these guys.

I get the feeling that Jack and Ennis are still together, at least emotionally, but this is cheating and I can't deal with that.

[booklovergirl]

Bethie,
I got your email, and I will email you back. xoxo
Carol :)))

[initwithu]

Normally I would be heartbroken at one of them hooking up, but Ennis really abandoned Jack,and Brady does seem like an upright and fun guy. Jack shouldn't beat himself up, and if they get back together, Ennis had better not punish Jack for this!