Fire and Ice - Chapter 32

May 18, 2008 22:52

 
The first part of this chapter was supposed to be the end of the previous chapter, but LJ said it was too long.

Also…this chapter was too long too, so I will continue it in chapter 33.

A few days later…

Jack awoke with a smile on his face, as he had every day since Ennis had called him. Today was going to be the best day in months: today was ( Read more... )

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maria47 May 19 2008, 08:11:31 UTC
Just exactly as I feared it would be: Brady is still around. I feel sorry for this poor boy, I don't think he has any chance and Jack obviously neither told Brady about the fantasic developments he and Ennis made nor did he tell Ennis anything about Brady.
Hmm, wonder how much trouble this will cause

Another great chapter.

Hugs
Maria

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samtyr May 19 2008, 15:12:24 UTC
Jack got a hattrick! YES!!!!! :D

Well, Jack certainly has a mess to straighten out! I'm hoping that he will talk to Ennis about Brady when they get home and hopefully Ennis will be able to accept what happened. I feel sorry for Brady though; nothing worse than being in love with someone and believing you're a good match, only to have them be committed to someone else. I'm glad that Ennis discovered who

PS. I wonder how this is going to affect Jack's game in the rest of the playoffs... ::worries::

Thank you for the update! I can't wait to see what happens next!

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samtyr May 19 2008, 15:14:47 UTC
Erm, sorry. That sentence fragment should read: I'm glad that Ennis discovered who left that hate note. Odd how it's often one of the people we least expect, isn't it? Even worse when they hide it that way; they can do so much more damage that way.

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Anticipating confrontation... graciesdaddy May 19 2008, 16:05:36 UTC
...is ALMOST as difficult as waiting for resolution.

Either way, Our Boys are in GOOD HANDS!! ;)

[Can't seem to say that enough, especially where you're concerned!]

...more shall be revealed...

Jon

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rosiet May 19 2008, 19:29:01 UTC
This was a great chapter Carol....so much going on...so much to love too....that Jack and Ennis talked seriously about their relationship... that Ennis has surprised Jack.... that embrace in front of the crowd... Gorgeous!!

But....Todd is a horror...and I'm not sure that we have heard the last of him yet... and Poor Brady...Aww.... I hope he finds someone of his own to love soon....

Looking forward to more
Thank you!

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trekfan May 19 2008, 20:57:10 UTC
WOW this was full of stuff. Todd is to blame for that paper? Ennis should let Jack know.

I like how he surprised Jack at the rink. Jack should have told Brady it was over. They had a nice time but it was a one shot thing they had going on and it is Ennis he wants to make a life with.

Looks like between Todd and Brady Ennis and Jack better watch their backs.

How is Jack going to explain Brady. Ennis will be crushed.

more please quick!

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