Comments | bookndaisies: Fic: You can take the girl out of Lima but her Swimfan tendencies will follow her anywhere

bookndaisies

Fic: You can take the girl out of Lima but her Swimfan tendencies will follow her anywhere

Jan 05, 2013 17:23

( She's pretty sure that stalking her ex on the internet while sorta dating someone and making out with a third guy isn't the Rachel Berry she wants to be, but it's who she is right now )

fanfic, finn and rachel, mine

Comments 8

Eeeeee! anonymous January 5 2013, 23:38:28 UTC

"I will always choose you." Excuse me while I drown in my feels. Such terrific canon-esque-but-AU/exactly-what-should-happen Finchel.

Also I loved meddling!Kurt and pitbull!Santana. Perfect.

If this is what the result looks like I wish you'd write more! :-)

-ja9

Re: Eeeeee! bookndaisies January 10 2013, 01:15:24 UTC

I wish I could write more too. Lol!! I did sit on this for 2 weeks not posting because I am me and insecure but it still took me 2 months to write. I just don't have the talent some people have when it comes to writing.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!!

anonymous January 6 2013, 02:18:10 UTC

Hi there! This was so matter-of-fact, poignant but so sweet at the same time ... I would love this to be canon! You were able to capture the "realness" of Finn and Rachel - that Rachel is still her crazy inlove self but trying to hold back and Finn - the Rachel fan but trying to move on .. and both obviously, can't!
Thanks for writing this and I hope you write more to get us through this painful Finchel time apart ....

bookndaisies January 10 2013, 01:16:30 UTC

Thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I just am so desperate for Finn/Kurt interaction. I hate that almost as much as the lack of Finchel.

signacio January 6 2013, 21:27:44 UTC

Very, very nice!!!

bookndaisies January 10 2013, 01:16:40 UTC

Thanks!!!

jonimitchells January 10 2013, 00:11:30 UTC

OW. I loved the frankness of your style here, the lack of Brody (sigh), and the realism, I guess? Obviously they're going to date, fool around, and I think that people a lot of the time make it a much bigger deal than it really is, so thank you for that! Loved this. Loved the resolution, etc. Thank you!!

bookndaisies January 10 2013, 01:24:54 UTC

I think everything would be a lot easier if either a) the show had never made them seem so perfect for each other from the beginning or b) had given Rachel more boys to be interested because it would seem more realistic (at least in my college experience) and less serious and dependent on a guy.

Regardless, I too think people get too hung up on sex. I was so close to having her sleep with the other guy but changed my mind at the last minute.

I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! I'm such a huge fan of your writing!! :)