Title: The Mighty Boosh Christmas Special of Glitter - Chapter 1
Pairing: Howard Moon/Vince Noir
Summary: In which Howard is plotting, Vince is worrying, Naboo is partying, and Christmas is coming-er, arriving-very soon.
Rating: PG-13
Word count: 2800
Notes: I’m SO sorry for needing a whole week to get the ball rolling, but I hope the fact that it
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And I'm glad you approve of picking up that mystery from the epilogue! It was such a great prompt that I had to use it. I'm excited to see what everybody else makes of it!
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I LOVED being able to draw on the canon of the Halloween story! I really hope everybody else does, too.
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Also, possibly the most pointless of all observations, but Howard's beard and the Midnight Barber line and Vince kissing his cheek is a fave. Thank you for that.
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And I am so glad you like that line, because it is a favorite of mine, too. I feel like Howard would look good with a beard, and it's the kind of thing Vince would want to resist on principle, but... it makes him happy and it suits Howard, so he has to finally just insist that Howard keep it neat, because he doesn't want him to cross over into tramp territory. ;)
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But your review makes perfect sense, and it also reassures me hugely and made me blush. I know the feeling you are talking about in reading, and if this made you feel that way, then I am VERY well satisfied. I couldn't help but think that Howard would not be very good at secrets (even though he thinks he is), particularly when he and Vince know each other so very well and have lived in each others' pockets for so long. And of course Vince wouldn't let on that he knows! If Howard figures out that Vince knows where the Secret Spot is, he might change it, and then where would Vince be? ;)
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You always hit the nail right on the head when it comes to a good third person limited narration, and this one is no exception, how you set up the situation from both of their perspectives, and of course it makes perfect understandable sense to each of them the way they're perceiving it, but the reader, seeing both, is just going DAMNIT BOYS, GDI, YOU'RE MAKING THIS MORE DIFFICULT THAN IT NEEDS TO BE.
Howard and his thoughts about their relationship just make me want to hug him. Being all satisfied at the ~symbolism of the box with its noble simplicity contrasted with the glittery bow, and being alright with Naboo and Bollo thinking his dopey smiles are creepy, because Vince seems to find them endearing and that's the important thing. His smug ( ... )
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