brigits_flame: Heavy

[bootler]

“Is this strictly necessary?” I ask through clenched teeth as I attempt to swing the sword Morgan has given me

Comments

[noelani_sitara]

Hello, your secondary editor here :)

&. Ours is not to enforce order, or crush to nonbeliever, or champion the weak. -> Ours is not to enforce order, or crush the nonbeliever, or champion the weak.

Lovely entry! Interesting way to tie in not just the physical heaviness but the moral heaviness as well. By any chance, will you be continuing this story?

Good luck!

[bootler]

Thank you! And, yes, you caught my typo. I didn't notice it until after I had already posted it, and didn't bother going back in to change it. Good eye, tho!

I don't know that I'll be continuing this story, since it's background for a D&D character in a campaign that I will be playing in the near future. I may try to write something with the campaign itself, but I haven't decided yet. We shall have to see.

[13_stories]

I'm jealous. This is a perfect little piece. I'm so glad that I joined Brigits_Flame and have had a chance to read this. On the other hand, it just shows me that I've got really stiff competition this month.

[bootler]

Aw, thanks very much!! Good luck to you this month :)

[illiana_galean]

That was very good. Made me miss playing WoW. lol. Damn, I miss my dwarven bonkadin.

[bootler]

Thanks very much!