Believe me, Part 1

[boredomdelux]

Anthony Padilla was walking quickly along the unusually quiet street, coughing a little at the cold air filling his lungs and stuffing his hands in his pockets. He walked with determination, knowing exactly where he was headed. The dark haired boy was looking for a certain best friend, who had gone out earlier that evening and hadn’t come back.

Comments

[michaelangelo24]

Ian will never be ugly to me. :) Excellent writing by the way, so a major success for you first fic. Now I'm off to read the hopefully sexy second half. :P

[boredomdelux]

No, I also think he's the cutest thing evar :)) *blushes* I succeeded? Thanks! :D And the second part is full of sexy-time, all right ;D

[smoshslashbabe]

so cute! Ian isn't ugly at all... in fact he's a babe!
Great Story!

[boredomdelux]

Totally agree ;)
Thank youu :D

[louiselecaca]

Aaaah I love it T^T I can't read the next part right now because I have to go to school...
For me, Ian is the cutest men I've ever seen =)

[boredomdelux]

Aw, there it is, school getting in the way of everything again X)
But I saw you read the second part now, so that's awesome ;D And Ian is definitely adorable :))

[arollinggirl]

Now.. that is a work of art.
Holy shit. You, miss, are an amazing writer. YOU'RE NOW MY IDOL

[boredomdelux]

No way! :o I'm your idol? Gah, so much responsibility! I was afraid the beginning was a little corny, and it was so hard to write X)
And dude, you write some pretty darn awesome stuff too, just so you know that! <3

[arollinggirl]

It wasn't corny at all <3 :3! I loved it, the suspense all built up and stuff :D
AND YES YOU AREEE XD! Aww, it's not much responsibility, the only thing I'm gonna do is stalk your page to see if you have new fanfics u- uh... I mean, wait very patiently for your new fanfics to come :D!
Aww, thanks ^_^

[boredomdelux]

Thanks so much! And lol @ the stalking XD
Unfortunately I don't know if I'm gonna have time to write very much though, 'cause school is killing me. But, we have a one-week holiday coming up in less than three weeks, so maybe something then? ^__^

[smoshluv]

So, I have a reputation for making lists when I have no other possible way to express all my jumbled thoughts.. now is one of those times.
1. Okay, so if I was a guy, I'd most likely have an erection right now.
2. Holy firetrucks, this was your first public fanfic?!?!?!
3. :O THIS WAS YOUR FIRST PUBLIC FANFIC?!?!?!?!?!?!
4. I love the detail, the plot, and how it's almost like experiencing this myself as both of them (I'd love that SO much.)
5. sexy.
6. WTFOMGITISIMPOSSIBLETHATTHISISYOURFIRST!
7. I love this so much! I'm going to explode if I don't read more like, right now. So I'm gonna' go do that X)
8. I have certain writers in the comm. that are my favorite. You, my friend, have totally made that list!!!!
9. <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
10. I still don't believe this is your first.

[boredomdelux]

*squeals -> faints*
I freaking love lists, especially yours! :D Would it be cool if I answered in list-form too? XD

1. aaahahahhaha XD
2. Yep yep :)
3. INDEED ;D
4. Aw, thanks, that was what I was hoping for :)) (omg I'm in XD)
5. Smosh IS sexy, you know it! ;D
6. BUTOMGITTOTALLYISICAN'TBELIEVEITTOOKMESOLONG!
7. Yay, fanfiction helps for everything! Even explosive people! :D
8. *swoons* no way :o I don't know if I deserve that just yet X)
9. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
10. You better believe it gurl, I was so nervous, shoo! (Gah, Tobuscus is seriously getting to me XD)