poem for English

[born2killu]

I hate love poems... I dunno how!! argh

Comments

[xxscarsofhopexx]

You SO quoted DC there.

[kirbienstien]

very nice....very nice indeed

Pretty Good

[6_letter_curse]

Out of the 6 stanzas, the second stanza had four lines in it versus three like the others. Being uniform in a poem so it flows better is often important. Not that its utterly necessary.

Other than that is pretty good.

i like to comment

[6_letter_curse]

i love commenting because im bored and no one will call me so now i comment first asia is a big place secondly sometimes in places like ontario or nova scotia its cold and last i need to control my laughter .