Comments | born_reader: I don't ask myself why I wanna be one with you, all I want is to rock your soul.

born_reader

I don't ask myself why I wanna be one with you, all I want is to rock your soul.

Dec 09, 2010 22:10

This is for the prompt: Arthur seduces Ariadne with his darker side. I really just couldn't resist writing it. This is dedicated to angel-puppeteer who I still owe chapters that need to be proofread after a year. I am such a slacker.

( what's wrong with me? why do I feel like this? I'm going crazy now. )

ariadne and arthur, angel_puppeteer

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born_reader December 11 2010, 05:58:06 UTC

you're welcome (: so glad you liked it!

v0id_dweller December 11 2010, 06:33:46 UTC

You.
You win the Internet.

JFC the hotness.

born_reader December 12 2010, 02:22:04 UTC

Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.

If I might ask, what does JFC mean?

choco_carebear December 11 2010, 09:37:50 UTC

OMG, this story. o______0 I am SO in love with this. The sex was HOT HOT HOT, but I really loved how you ended it with that angsty yet tender exchange of kisses, and Arthur admitting that he was a fuck-up but wanting to make a relationship between him and Ariadne work. And of course, Eames and his snarky comments. Always love how he's a part of these kind of stories. Kudos for writing this!! <3

born_reader December 12 2010, 02:24:19 UTC

Ehh, the ending was a little rocky for me and I wasn't sure if it would work but you proved me wrong. Thanks!

And how could I ever resist putting Eames in a story?

madcowre December 11 2010, 10:32:17 UTC

That was hawt! DAYUM ;)

born_reader December 12 2010, 02:25:19 UTC

thanks! don't get burned (:

greenpixidust December 11 2010, 12:02:46 UTC

Very enjoyable. Gives me some ideas for my fic. I like to read what others are doing when I get a little stuck, and there will probably be some borrowed elements from this in what I'm planning.

Mainly since I'm also writing my Arthur as a man who desperately needs to be in control.

But good show, all around. :P

born_reader December 12 2010, 02:28:14 UTC

Glad to be of some help! I read when I get stuck too and I use some of other peoples' elements (: can't wait to see your fic. I think Arthur in general likes to be in control, he is the Point Man after all.