new poem

May 05, 2005 14:24

Your critique seems 2 dimensional
Though your first glance is beautiful
Progress with what you lack in time
Cold and confident in the heat of depression
No proper words or talent for genius expression
Admiration and jealousy go hand in hand
Confidence deceased
Aspirations decreased

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skyaleah May 6 2005, 06:04:25 UTC
pretty

kitten kisses
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rockabillydude May 6 2005, 07:16:09 UTC
hey doll, today was awesome, im glad everything is happy again!

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