I've smoked four packs of cigarettes today, is that okay?

[bothendslit]

I have less of a headache now, so I wrote a poem.. to help me feel better about how.. weird things have been.. I don't really feel better, but here it is, anyway....

The dark shadows of doubt cast over me

Comments

[lostforeigner]

Ah.. once again, you have written a.. very good poem. Very expressive. ::nods::

[bothendslit]

Oh, um.. thank you, Alfons...

[lostforeigner]

Somehow, I think I can relate to it a bit as well... but, ah, I.. don't think I would have thought of some of the imagery there. It's very.. creative.

[bothendslit]

..well.. I'm glad you can relate, I guess... but that's not really a good thing for you.... I'm sorry you feel that way. It's really not too great of a poem, though.. I hope you don't feel like that for long.

[thegermanone]

I don't read poetry much.... but that is very nice, Jean. a little spooky, but nice..

[bothendslit]

Oh? You.. you really ought to. It.. calms the soul. Sometimes... Thank you... Is it? Hm.. I've been feeling rather odd, I guess.. more than usual..

[evilalphonse]

::laughs:: That is the most horribly stupid thing I've read all day.

[bothendslit]

::winces:: I'm... I'm.. sorry you feel that way..

[evilalphonse]

Yeah, you should be. I should take it and tear it up before anyone else has to read it.

[bothendslit]

::grits his teeth:: I'd.... really rather you not... ;__;