Comments | bottomsnape: Needs Must (Chapters 7 and 8)

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Needs Must (Chapters 7 and 8)

Sep 04, 2007 00:37

Author: Melusin ( Read more... )

Comments 22

battle_of_lissa September 5 2007, 20:43:56 UTC

Gah! Nooooooo! I read in anticipation, looking forward to their appointment, and you cut it off there?!

I find it very intriguing that anal penetration is a necessity for Hermione. I'm sure there's a reason for this.

Looking forward to the next update!

melusin_79 September 5 2007, 20:46:53 UTC

Ah, well, you know what happens next.

It's just a Domme thing ;)

pimpinellae September 6 2007, 22:27:07 UTC

I usually don't read het, but I can't resist a good BDSM, and yours is delicious. I like the attention you put to both their feelings - especially the progress Snape makes is interesting to watch. And the gradually revealed bits of back-story make the fic all the more enjoyable for me and very believable. Oh, and I mustn't forget Minerva's concern - that was a nice touch!

I'm eagerly awaiting next update. :)

melusin_79 September 7 2007, 08:56:46 UTC

Thank you - it's always nice to know that a non-Hermione/Severus shipper is reading something I've written. I hope you continue to enjoy it.

lurkerfromoz September 6 2007, 22:35:59 UTC

I just love this. The back story is being teased out at a rate that makes me really want to scream with frustration - I'm an impatient person - but is guaranteed to keep me hooked. The resoning behind the characters' action is believable, and their interactions, even at a distance, are brilliant. More, please.

melusin_79 September 7 2007, 09:00:53 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying it. As for the backstory - I don't want to give it all away at once- I think it would be tedious - it's better the reader pieces it together for herself, rather than me spell out all the gory detail in one go.

amsev September 20 2007, 06:56:12 UTC

OH, man, but I am kicking myself for not having checked my f-list for a while. This continues to be simply exquisite. I am so glad that sub severus is gradually discovering himself and the freedoms to be found. Of all people in the HP Universe, he deserves it.

Gah, those Death Eaters are just plain AWFUL. I'm glad Hermione escaped with her life from that nastiness.

The idea of Severus standing in the moonlight, pale, too thin and all flaws showing is just so liberatingly beautiful to think of it for the man.

I am SO looking forward to reading more!

melusin_79 September 20 2007, 08:31:36 UTC

Thank you so much for commenting. I'm enjoying writing it, but it will be a little while before I get back to it.

carolinelamb September 22 2009, 09:30:57 UTC

i read this only today, after raiding that bottom!snape comm.

i liked your story very much. you write snape in a very desirable way without "beautifying" him. his longings and fantasies seem to be very canon - at least to me :)

melusin_79 September 22 2009, 09:49:15 UTC

Thank you - I must get back to it soon